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Danteus1yrPostedThis author, eudine, has one of the greatest abilities of description I have seen in a long while. She goes through the extra trouble to make you vividly feel as though you are a part of the scene. This is a masterpiece and a work of art. Wonderful job. I've also written stories of this genre before, but never chose to publish. You might have inspired me to start up again Good luck, eudine!
- Danteus1yrReplied to DanteusCh 1 The Return
- Danteus1yrCommentedCh 1 The Return
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Overall I think that this novel is a great novel for folks into aggressive romance, etc. The cover is extremely well done and to reiterate what another reviewer (Namely Yuki Ono) I completely agree with their review. Of course there is the occasional spelling error/grammatical error, but who cares to be honest. The author gets their plot across well despite a few mistakes in the writing! Good luck Author!
- Danteus1yrReplied to ShamelessGengar
Bro how did you screw that one up... Tar and Honey?......
At this point the elder hesitated to continue. He yelled out once more in rage, this time, loud enough for the neighboring sects to hear him. - Danteus1yrReplied to Danteus
*assassins*
Like a bowling ball hitting the pins, the punk fell back to his mates behind him, clearing them out of the way as he flew back all the way to the end. The other assassins were forced to move to the sides, stunned by the sheer strength of Yohan. - Danteus1yrCommented
#assissinshavetosticktogether
Like a bowling ball hitting the pins, the punk fell back to his mates behind him, clearing them out of the way as he flew back all the way to the end. The other assassins were forced to move to the sides, stunned by the sheer strength of Yohan. - Danteus1yrPosted
A truly exciting read, a great start to a novel that I hope will be incredibly long and detailed. The novel does seem to have a tried subject, but the author manages to find some great ways to spice up the story. I am very hooked and will be adding this to my collection. Congrats on almost 340k reads!
- Danteus1yrCommentedCh 7 An Exercise To Fight
- Danteus1yrReplied to Mi_22
Also, considering that he ate the Qi Mastery Pill that gives eighty nine years of cultivation in one go and was able to successfully transfer it to his spirit, he has that extra capacity. So basically, his Qi is 136 years old.
He arrived ten minutes late for class and sprinted as quickly as he could. Had Huanzhi been able to transfer his Qi into Yijin's body, then this whole debacle could have been avoided. After remembering to transfer his Qi slowly into Yijin's body, he found that it would take him exactly one year to reach the pinnacle of greatness. Currently, Yijin's body had half of the Qi that Huanzhi's original body had had after more than forty years of cultivation. - Danteus1yrReplied to
Also thanks for continuing to read!
He arrived ten minutes late for class and sprinted as quickly as he could. Had Huanzhi been able to transfer his Qi into Yijin's body, then this whole debacle could have been avoided. After remembering to transfer his Qi slowly into Yijin's body, he found that it would take him exactly one year to reach the pinnacle of greatness. Currently, Yijin's body had half of the Qi that Huanzhi's original body had had after more than forty years of cultivation. - Danteus1yrReplied to
SPOILER ALERT! Just for the sake of the length of the novel. I must make it so, though there will be an event in the future that causes him to lose almost all of his Qi Mastery and causes him to start from scratch. This most likely will be after Volume 1 is completed!
He arrived ten minutes late for class and sprinted as quickly as he could. Had Huanzhi been able to transfer his Qi into Yijin's body, then this whole debacle could have been avoided. After remembering to transfer his Qi slowly into Yijin's body, he found that it would take him exactly one year to reach the pinnacle of greatness. Currently, Yijin's body had half of the Qi that Huanzhi's original body had had after more than forty years of cultivation. - Danteus1yrCommentedCh 6 A REQUEST TO MEET