Well written, witty. Fix a repetitions and it will be perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter! GOOD LUCK, AUTHOR! I hope you find accomplishment in what you do!
musa45
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Yes, the repetition has been fixed!
I think you have read the old one, I have recently updated chapter 1. If there is any flaw please mention. it would be grateful to me.