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Being honest. I had zero expectation when starting reading(cause of the author himself cough). The first few chapters, I didn't really like how the system was given. However, after a few chapters. I enjoy the bits of comedy here and there, and how it slowly progress and the light hearted theme (so far as I'm reading idk how long it will remain this way). So I can't wait to see how the story slowly develops more. (Author you better continue this or I spam your notifications.)
Are you able to make a sword using only fingernails? Or make hair sharper? Are you able to make fingernails grow on arm? Imagine an arm sword with sharp teeth on the edge. Actually maybe not ..
writer when you gonna update??? Whennnnnnn comme on stop being lazyyy
Interesting read. The idea is intriguing, with a nice synopsis. If you enjoy more of more tell than show, this is the book for you. .. . . There’s some grammar mistakes here and there that’s obvious, along with times when the tenses are used wrongly in certain situations. It just throws people off. The flow of the whole story so far feels awkward, with this here happening and suddenly that happening? And some parts I just get confused. It isn’t me questioning what’s gonna happen, is me thinking, what just happened? Author can break some paragraphs apart since it gets a little too long n feels straining to read. I’m saying the cause on my ipad it’s already looks long, I can’t imagine reading on a phone. There’s also too many characters introduced at such a short time, with not enough for world building. There’s many rooms for improvement, but I like the idea. Keep it up!
One word for this. Hooked. I just kept reading without realising four chapters had passed. The flow feels so seamless, the world building is fantastic along with the way the characters are introduced . Grammar wise I don't really see any mistakes, or maybe it was so small it wasn't worth paying attention to. I'm no Grammar police afterall. It is kinda bloody after the second chap, but like the synopsis said. Matural content. The characters are very realistic, like the fact that the mc isn't like some princess secretly well trained, and actually just a princess. And how ruthless the pirates are. Its also interesting to still see how some was forced into it and not go all ruthless killing. Like Razmyr and James feels like a foil character of each other. Keep up the awesome job!! I'm gonna read more now..
Welcome to the freak show Take your seat but Don't look out the windows The monsters like to jump out of the dark Does this song sound familiar? If it is, that will be the vibe of the beginning of the book. If you don't know, read on to experience it for yourself! Nothing is as it seems. Why is technology so advanced yet have so limited ways of using? Why is magic so powerful but not everyone can use it? Peek your interest yet? Buckle up 'cause this is just the start...
This book is a great book if you want to wind down after a long day of work. It's very chill with a few face slapping scenes. I've got a feeling the plot bout to take an interesting turn in the near future.
I’m not well versed in Greek mythology but I’m well versed in reading and judging. Chapter one was quite nice with a short introduction of the world. The pacing is quite alright, not so fast that turns me off, and not so slow that bores me. However by chapter 4 I’m kinda confused about many things. Like what artefacts you trying get? Why do you need it? Did I miss something? What uncles? Huhh There’s not much emotions that can be felt, it’s more of telling with little to no show. I hope to see more emotions or at least feel what the mc is feeling, ya know? Keep up your work, I hope it can improve and morph to something amazing!
Good stuff, deserve 5 stars. Can't wait to read more. kek
So far so nice, I like the world building and the immersion it brings. It’s only 3 chapter so far, so I can’t say much. But the world building tho it’s great and not so boring. I can’t wait for more chap. I’m giving you five stars cause I’m counting on the fact you gonna have stable updates.. I will come back rewrite a review when it crosses the hundred chapters. If I don’t forget.. Anyways! I love the concept, and like I repeated. The world building is awesomee. Keep it up!