Review Detail of hypoxis in Son of Atlas:Revenge

Review detail


I’m not well versed in Greek mythology but I’m well versed in reading and judging. Chapter one was quite nice with a short introduction of the world. The pacing is quite alright, not so fast that turns me off, and not so slow that bores me. However by chapter 4 I’m kinda confused about many things. Like what artefacts you trying get? Why do you need it? Did I miss something? What uncles? Huhh There’s not much emotions that can be felt, it’s more of telling with little to no show. I hope to see more emotions or at least feel what the mc is feeling, ya know? Keep up your work, I hope it can improve and morph to something amazing!


Son of Atlas:Revenge


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