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Slumpii_Zednem_9471mthCommentedWhy not take this off? You’ve been posting this for the past 20 chapters as if they’re gonna fight the next chapter
A/N:- The fated battle between Izuna and Madara is here. Join my pat reon at:- Slumpii_Zednem_9472mthCommented
What about forcidium?
I called it, Forcium. Not very good, but it was all I had. The reason it was called that, was that I thought about what it was taht could achieve anything. I realised that everything was possible using the Force, so I basically created a new metal using the Force and some of my vitality. It was a very personal process, that was supported by the Force itself. And the result? - Slumpii_Zednem_9473mthCommented
+1
*Assassins creed (unknown which) - Slumpii_Zednem_9474mthReplied to NecronFlayedOnes
Id love that too, but it’s not possible fam. the Vikings series starts in 793 while the real historical events happened mid 800s
The raids from Vikings have drawn significantly from his treasuries, with him having to pay more soldiers than needed, and also employing mercenaries to patrol their costs. - Slumpii_Zednem_9474mthCommented
That’s just dumb. He already got his kid body to transcend. So how did he not sense that¿
"Calm down kid." Orochimaru came from behind me and wrapped his snake around me. Damn. How did I not feel him creeping up to me? - Slumpii_Zednem_9474mthCommented
This sucked complete as*
A/N: Okay this brings us to the end of the first arc. Merry Christmas y'all and stay tuned for more. - Slumpii_Zednem_9474mthCommented
Is the mc a little bi***.? I’m starting to hate him even though the fic is interesting
Samael roared to Alan who was completely immobilised by a gaze from the demiurge. - Slumpii_Zednem_9474mthCommented
Why are you making your mc seem like a dumba**? It’s just unnecessary drama that you’re adding, I have a feeling of how it will play out. I honestly want to know why you’re making your mc like that.
"You don't have to put it that way, you know." I said while scratching my cheeks shyly. "It's something..." - Slumpii_Zednem_9474mthReplied to Lone_Philosopher
I’m as confused as you are, it’s sort of dumb but still good
"I did this for Lilith. Don't misunderstand…." - Slumpii_Zednem_9475mthCommented
Kushina for me even though I want to vote for Minato. my reason- I feel like saving Kushina would be smart since you’ll eventually have orochimaru attack during the chunin exam and he will eventually go against the Hiruzren, which is where the old man dies, he’ll also get his mom. For the dad, if he was to be saved then I don’t think orochimaru would even have a chance against him in fight unless Minato was gravely injured, hiruzen was still the hokage like the anime. It’s your fic though, you can do what you want with it
Ch 346 Chapter 121 - Slumpii_Zednem_9475mthCommentedCh 21 Update~
- Slumpii_Zednem_9475mthCommented
Who’s the third?
Following the demise of Vlad and Lady Eliza, Theon Stark embraced a solitary life, spending the rest of his days as a hermit. He only interacted with his son and grandson. Post-Jason Stark, only three Starks persisted with the Wolfsblood and Mark of Ulmo: Torrhen Stark, and Cregan Stark. - Slumpii_Zednem_9476mthCommented
I feel like like ‘unless ‘will fit better than ‘except’
This was a direct breach in the initial treaty signed by all the Kages in the first Kage summit. It was a law that no Kage was allowed to interfere in a battle except their village was facing it's end. - Slumpii_Zednem_9476mthReplied to Naischtir
She dies after the jinchuriki is extracted and put in Kuahina. It’s happens in the show as well when the others have their beast removed for the ten tails.
"Five years, Tsuna. Five years is all I have left." Mito said with a sombre tone. - Slumpii_Zednem_9476mthCommented
The second quotation should be before “asked father”
"Who are the angels that are coming with you to Earth, asked Father." - Slumpii_Zednem_9476mthCommented
Sit*
Reaching the training ground she found that she was the earliest one and decided to seat under a tree and meditate like her grandmother had taught her. - Slumpii_Zednem_9478mthCommentedCh 541 506. Super Planetary Core Mega Rasengan
- Slumpii_Zednem_9478mthReplied to yenool_senut
It has been a few years, we just don’t know his exact age
Upon returning to the temple, Gavin was made a Jedi Knight. Young to be sure, but he was well liked and trusted by the Jedi order. - Slumpii_Zednem_9478mthCommented
You should put Au in the title cause that has nothing to do with the show. That’s just my opinion though
I look at the card again and place it in my pocket afterwards. I have never heard of an SCP Foundation... but he is probably high up in the hierarchy if he is the Site Director. - Slumpii_Zednem_9478mthCommentedCh 534 499. Descent of Calamity Part-2