Didnt even read but with no summary besides a random sentence can already tell it dookie cheeks

Imma pass on this. From what u summarized i find it weird to fantasize that heavily over a FICTIONAL character. Like bro, you get transported into a world where u can be as strong as a god and ur simpin over some random chick lmao. Not only that but it seems like such op powers are wasted on a pathetic person like that

Damn was gonna read but yea that sounds ass. From the summary it sounds like dude just gets to respawn infinitely yet he still jealous of regular protagonists?

Wow, a cliche saving damsel in distress scene already? My hopes have been shattered author

I dont like that he is getting random crew members when he talked about getting betrayed but whatever. Dont really know y he wouldnt be able to solo the verse with a system tho

Same here, wayy to drawn out with the yakuza when they arent even that strong or have any relevance to the main story

How is he not a pyschopath or cold? He kills in cold blood and manipulates to get what he wants. Dont really know if u just racist or what brining chinese into this lmao

Imma give my honest review. It was really good, like im talking one of the best fanfics ive read when it comes to the writing quality. However, I was disappointed in the fact that the yakuza situation played out for so damn long… like so long even the author got bored of it and dropped it. I get the author wanna show off his iq quirk from Nezu but it was just too dragged out. Especially when he is manipulating people when there is no need for it. He is so strong to the point where manipulating feels pointless, at least on something like a gang that barely has any quirks. However my biggest complaint is the fact that Shin never goes to academy. Hes over here copying shit quirks when he knows who has the best ones from the story. So yea, had massive potential but squandered it quite hard i would say. Author if you see this I believe u can write a really good fic if not ur own novel but maybe get an editor to tell u if u are dragging or how to pace correctly as the story really felt like it went nowhere. Cool concept tho so nice attempt at least, good luck if u try writing again 😁

Felt like more of a challenge fighting the small fry compared to the boss

Really good story. Not too much smut scenes and good story development. Also had excellent character design. 🔥

Alright, so the fight scenes are very entertaining and well written. However, my god is the dialogue cringe at times. The lol and dum dum shit is very childish and off putting. At least the characters are put together nicely. Overall though, don’t really like the whole “fix humanity” thing. Why can’t he just be a villain that is pure evil? No cause behind the violence he causes, just pure malevolence. Besides, whats the point of ruling over a species they deem trash? At chap 97 currently, but he still being controlled by the inner voice that is most likely the original progenitor. 6.5/10

Easily my favorite novel on this site. Had to reacclimate to regular society ways after binging this ngl. Characters, world, story, everything is top tier.

Its an ok read but has a lot of fluff imo.

It was pretty good at beginning. It’s just that I feel like the story is too focused on plot with very little fighting. He got super high mana affinity and the only fight he used it in was when he was holding back. That’s the other thing, why hold back so much? What’s the point when he wants to break off from family to go solo? Overall, its a decent read just not that blood pumping honestly.

Come on bro, do u think that old powerful cultivator would just talk with some random mortal? My guess is that’s who he is at his core, and if so then he doesn’t need a tragic backstory.

Started out really good but after he took over the elf princess the whole story went to shit ngl. Wayyy to much talking from the monster pov and the elf servants were obnoxious as hell. Lets not even talk about calling the carriage mr. creaky 😑

So it wasnt enough for him just to be her bodyguard but you even made him her dog and gave her a rank up for what? Feeding him a potion? Just make her the MC at this point. Dropped

Wow! You cant make this stuff up. How pathetic are you trying to make the MC look?! Anybody wondering if you should read this… dont! This dude sat in a bush while watching 2 people have s*x like some weird creep. He has 2 girlfriends yet he does this cringe sh*t? Not only that but somehow… just somehow his pants ripped and his d*ck got exposed. So you’re probably thinking he ran away right? Well he didnt, just sat on the ground with his erect c*ck in full view of the couple. I mean seriously, if you’re gonna make such a subhuman as your MC then whats the point. Might as well make a female MC story since you clearly love writing about how sexy and strong they are compared to this beta cuck.

Beta MC, forgets all the stuff that happens to him and forgives like he is some saint. But not really because he just thinks with his peen. Oh she’s hot… let’s just forget about all the terrible things she did to you bc you wanna get your miniscule pp hard. Also nice of the author to describe female allure more than the actual story content itself, like really?! He has a badass system where he can obtain any power, but where is it? Why offscreen the training and force us to read the stuff nobody cares about. Oh yea, lets not forget how he just magically powers up at the ”right time” over and over. Honestly, I’m more upset at myself for wasting my time with this novel… sigh.