Review Detail of HigherBeing in MHA: Power's Of Redo Of Healer

Imma give my honest review. It was really good, like im talking one of the best fanfics ive read when it comes to the writing quality. However, I was disappointed in the fact that the yakuza situation played out for so damn long… like so long even the author got bored of it and dropped it. I get the author wanna show off his iq quirk from Nezu but it was just too dragged out. Especially when he is manipulating people when there is no need for it. He is so strong to the point where manipulating feels pointless, at least on something like a gang that barely has any quirks. However my biggest complaint is the fact that Shin never goes to academy. Hes over here copying shit quirks when he knows who has the best ones from the story. So yea, had massive potential but squandered it quite hard i would say. Author if you see this I believe u can write a really good fic if not ur own novel but maybe get an editor to tell u if u are dragging or how to pace correctly as the story really felt like it went nowhere. Cool concept tho so nice attempt at least, good luck if u try writing again 😁