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They think wrote something good and expect praise, and after that when I criticize, they get angry... Sorry I couldn't bear to read this s♡♡t!

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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to Ero_Sage

    No one is forcing you to comment just because you disagree with me, You are intolerant! And :

    Ch 1 A Piggy Bank
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    Supreme Harem Hunter
    Action · StumblingtoSuccess
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Posted

    Chapter 234 and I dropped. I don't remember who said this novel is not a cliché, but I sincerely curse him. Mc always fights against stronger opponents and wins. In conversations and thought process he is a complete idiot. Just like the proud Chinese novel pratogs, he is honest and doesn't lie (only sometimes he doesn't speak, instead of lying, and other idiots believe what they make up in their heads. JUST cliché). He is not even a little bit cunning, his supposed cunning and intelligence is determined by the low IQ NPCs created by the author. But despite all this, this is not the reason why I dropped the novel, it's the cultivation realms nonsense created by the author. His wife, who started cultivating with him on the same level as him after they left inheritince together, still was on the same level as him in chapter 234! Some people might say what's the big deal, so let me explain: Mc has a heavenly treasure that purifies Qi and increases his cultivation speed, he is an alchemist, he has an ungraded technique for his cultivation - Monarch Eternal Body (his wife's is only Saint-LowGrade) and he has a cultivation treasure that speeds up the world around him by 10 times compared to the outside - Stone of time. In short, they started cultivating at similar levels and now they are both at the same level. What took Mc months to breakthrough the realm, his wife breakthrough it in 10 days! Reason? - None! The only thing that makes her such a cultivating machine instead of the Mc is that the Author want to be her that way. I mean, it's so obvious that he keeps giving her pointless power-ups, supposedly to avoid making her a vase. Sometimes even he forgets to write down the reason. I mean, I can't understand how he can breakthrough realms the here and climb the cultivation realms like climbing a ladder. Mc uses the same pills she uses, his cultivation time is way more than her and he has the treasure/techniques I wrote above, but he's still on the same fking level as her!!! The only difference in cultivation may be the difference in quality. But that doesn't make any sense to me either! Every time Mc's cultivation level rises, so does the level of the opponent he can fight against. And us, as a reader, we wait for action and try to figure out what the limit him is this time. If the d♡♡n cultivation realms don't work for him and even a regular guy can catch him after a while, why did you put him there as a cultivator! If you had just put Super-Man, we would have read it. Because according to the cultivation system of the world, his fighting prowess is no fun at all!!! He's always fighting stronger opponents. That's why he's cautious at first, then he wins after hard process. I was so bored while I was reading that even dropped novel because his wife on the same level with him for no reason and no logic, and this made me realize how pointless his cultivation speed/talent was and I fall the novel down. Next time, if the author is going to write a cultivation novel, he should first give his characters some brains. Then give his Mc and the other living characters a sensible cultivating system. Let them not randomly achieve the success that Mc has achieved through his ordeal for no reason.

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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to Daddy_strikes_

    You're just polluting the webnovel with this garbage fiction. Your constant deletion of comments will not stop people from pointing out how garbage your fiction and writing is. Just accept it and put a warning somewhere next time if you are going to write cuckold Mc!

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    Movies · Daddy_strikes_
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    40 different world = 40 Gwen. Ladies and Gentlemen, We all know where this is going...

    Ch 5 Another Earth
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    Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
    Movies · Addyctive7
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to Addyctive7

    Put a villain tag, otherwise you'll have to deal with idiots like this. They're pacifists when it comes to Spider-Man. I thought this chap was pretty good, btw.

    Ch 5 Another Earth
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    Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Posted

    The synopsis of this novel is this: I'm an Asgardian beta cuck and I don't mind sharing my lover just so I can fk others. .. .. Warning: Yuri NTR

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    Unscientific Asgardian of Marvel
    Movies · Daddy_strikes_
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to Demon_King22

    Well, I'll wait for a rage scene, but even then, it will be a big disappointment if he can't show his powers properly. Because for both Saiyan and Doomsday sides reach their potential, he have to fight. And as for the romance part... I don't know, it feels, it will be forced here. I'll wait and see. I'm fine as long as it doesn't ruin the story...

    Ch 2 Chapter - 2
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    Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to Novel_Manga_2624

    Dude, Mc is a symbiotic creature, what do you expect? If necessary, it can grow big enough to swallow the planet and destroy civilizations. If I remember correctly, it's in their genetic memory. They were created for this purpose. Besides, mc is no longer human and it swallows not for breakfast but to grow. Just look up venom wiki and you'll see how the species evolves. For super-humans, He can transfer their powers to his own genome like he did here in spider girl. He can go after special people for the sake of power.

    Ch 3 Exploring
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    Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
    Movies · Addyctive7
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to Addyctive7

    I get it, man, if it's inexperience, that's fine, but I'm talking from the other side's point of view. The idea of merging with a sentient and intelligent being like venom can be disgusting. For Spider-man, it was. I would have expected a little more reaction and objection from Gwen. Other than that, everything is good. Right now, he's transferred her powers into his genome. Can he do the same to mutants in the future? Or is he going to do a mutant hunt Xd?

    Ch 3 Exploring
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    Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    How can you make someone with Saiyan-doomsday power and Dna a pacifist and a loser with human emotions ? With that much power, he's just trash. He's a combination of two Op bodies and you still make him a nice guy. You know he doesn't need to be grateful to those girls, right? With his own power, let alone their pathetic power, he could take down the research center in seconds. I think it's bad for this story that you gave him past human memories from the earth, very bad. You could have done it like your Tdg fiction and things would have gone much more naturally and well. It would have been original in the reactions, but now he will always hold herself back because of those 'precious' memories.

    Ch 2 Chapter - 2
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    Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to yuri_mumu

    Well, that's fair. But like I said, this novel was boring for me and that's why I didn't read many chapters. And the part that I did read, it didn't mention that it was more of a family, so... Yeah, I didn't find that very entertaining. In fact, he still thought it was just a stupid dream. In short, in his dream he was enjoying himself and playing sergeant. That's what you do when you have a chance to realize that you are in a dream, isn't it? In short, what he was doing was having fun in his dream... You know, for someone who is a leafling in this cruel and 'real' world, it doesn't give them much time to train someone else... Actually I could go with it if he used them for a while to survive, but as I said, the other way around is not for me. And if there are others who are not, they will see this comment and judge accordingly. In addition, I didn't disrespect the labor here and give 1 star. I hope some of you understand that some things don't appeal to others...

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    Reincarnated As A Plant Life
    Fantasy · Kurai_Takahashi
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    All right, man, the fic's off to a great start. The only problem is that he contacted Gwen too quickly. He could have waited a bit, read her memories and then slowly revealed himself. I mean, if I saw an organism merging with me, I would inevitably scare, freak out and call for help immediately. He was a bit careless here. And this could be a problem if he accidentally pretends to be human. If he revealed himself after a while, I think he could have used an excuse like 'I studied your world while I was with you'. Anyway, the fanfic is good so far, it would only be more realistic if he is more careful in the later parts or if the people he gets merging with don't accept him right away. On the other hand, Instead of this, he could swallow some of them completely.

    Ch 3 Exploring
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    Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    Wov, this chap was epic. It was good that he killed him. Honestly, in a world where gods and primordals fk up reality as they please, I think it's not very realistic to gain power for free. If the author had just made a filler chaps about this character just because he's loved by people and only empowered Mc through perseverance, willpower and friendship, I would have left this fanfic.

    Ch 53 BLOOD
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    W♡f is Arthur technically dead now? Or is he going to be Vril Dox with his memories? I don't know if I read this far for Arthur's story for nothing. Nice chap, btw.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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    Diabolical [DC Comics/Harry Potter]
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Posted

    WARNING : Throughout the story, from the hero and heroine to the supporting characters, the MC strives to make sure they all have a better life. Reason - None! Thinking about your own life - None! The hero will already have a good life after a few hardships, why are you trying to be the unsung hero by protecting him from the shadows!!?!? In short, this novel garbage! It's about an idiot who licks the hero's boot after immigrating and pretends to be a villain to supposedly survive. Doesn't the brainless idiot realize that if he still acts like a villain he might be harmed by it in the future ? Also why protect the protagonist/heroins just to keep the plot in place. Mc has no reason here to immediately make huge sacrifices for the characters of a game he just immigrated to! The author of this novel is a spineless writer who deleted reviews just because he think : 'It didn't reflect his book properly.' Yes, you can cry, because I would rather not read your book than the one I found in the trash-can. You don't have to whine because people are telling the hard truth.

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    Reborn As The Villain
    Fantasy · Immortal_17
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Posted

    3 chapter and fall. This novel doesn't even deserve to be called trash. A loser with hero syndrome and looking for a thrilling death saves a b♡♡ch who is not even grateful to him in exchange for his life. The way he's treated afterward is a boytoy. I don't know what idiot with a strange woman fetish wrote this novel but... What I see is that you gave a 'cheat' someone in the sh♡tt♡st way of any novel I've ever read. Even what he got was take to look like he begged for it and there's this illusion that he doesn't deserve it at all. No matter how much power he gets, he's just a female playtoy who gets power by licking the bottom of someone's shoe!

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    Battle and Sex Is All A Primordial Fiend Needs
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    Well, man, I don't mind him creating a false image for himself ( image of a hero). It might make it easier for him in some ways. But I hope in the future it won't turn into more of an anti-hero Mc style. And yeah this chapter I don't understand why a clever, calculating and cunning guy like Arias would do something that he doesn't think will benefit him. No doubt, Queen Bee is hot but in his mind she won't be grateful to him so isn't there a contradiction here? I mean why would he be the anonymous benefactor behind it all and not even let her see him save her? If you're going to save her, save her properly, right? If it's not a case of hero saves beauty, just let her die. Of course the main point here is not that the hero saves beauty! I mean, saving her is meaningless.

    Ch 55 Chapter 55: A False Hero Part 2
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to f0Ri5

    Author-san, can his physique swallow other physiques? I mean, usually in cultivation novels, special physiques such as Supreme Demon Physque, Chaos Physique etc. are introduced as being able to devour other people's talent, soul and special physique. I wonder what's the similarity between these and the Yaoguai you're talking about here, is it basically the same? And yes, you haven't released many chapters, but it would be good if you make an extra chapter with the levels of artifacts, cultivation realms, alchemy pills, cultivation techniques... for easy understanding.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    I Am The Heavenly Demon
    Fantasy · f0Ri5
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Replied to f0Ri5

    Are you thinking of adding a 'villain' tag to this novel? It seems to me so far that his identity fits this.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    I Am The Heavenly Demon
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  • Lol1san
    Lol1san1yr
    Commented

    Wov, so in the future this 'young' emperor was the one who left the inheritance and is Fang Yuan the one who took his inheritance and used the cultivation method? And is he also a like Fang Yuan - Son of fate? Compared the Fang Yuan, he is look like final boss. I'm waiting for the new chaps.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    I Am The Heavenly Demon
    Fantasy · f0Ri5
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