this is one of the best pokemon fan-fics that i have found as it has great story writing and I personally like the pacing of the story and it having a good stability to the chapter releases with it also being made alongside a second fan-fic as well.

thanks for the great chapter and i'm so glad you chose YveItaI as his last pokemon because it's my favourite pokemon from pokemon X and Y

thanks for the great chapter.

thanks for the great chapter. can't wait for the next one, also can he get yveltal or Trevenant

Thanks for the great chapter, hope you keep it going for a while

Thanks for the chapter.

time for the juggernaut to come :)

Thanks for the chapter cant wait for the next one

Thanks for the chapter. when are you going to use the new smithing ticket that he got form one of the quests?

no problem. can't wait for next chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter. please let him get regigigas

thank you for the chapter can't wait for the next one

thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next one

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next. can you give him totodile or alolan muk plz

thanks for the chapter it was very good and can't wait for the next one

thanks for the great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)

this was an amazon chapter keep up the great work :)

I really like is so for but what year is it set in as i'm getting confused but i'm guessing the 1800's. also i'm not from america so i don't know it's history