Takes too long to update

interesting, but i actually take my knowledge on this from the islam teachings , it teaches that adam and eve were the first humans created by God , and the thing about eve is that we believe she wasn’t like any women that came after her as she had a blessing of giving birth to only twins male and female back then .

I am a fan of good stories , ( i dont read this one anymore tho :v)

I feel bad for this women tbh , she wasn’t even triggered in this clip, just a pretty bad time and angle for the picture

Ramadan kareem my dude

huh ? are speaking from your speculations or is it cannon that hirezun never sent his clan members to war ?

Thank you ! Omg i hate romance in naruto ffs

It’s probably because they got intel that iwa sent the 5 tails , so i think she is only sent as a way of evening the threat of nuclear weapons

Nice idea , first time seeing an mc with a template system like this actually not being passive about gaining more synchronization %

While being 19 years old , pretty good if you ask me , he take matters into his hands from there and get stronger

Finally , i though you droped the fic T-T

Brother i am starting to think that you just don’t understand me just because you dont want to not and not trying to , i didn’t og naruto is more cannon than shippuden i just said that it was pretty with the animations and ninja were actually ninja not walking weapons of mass destruction, so thats why we cant compare shippuden powers lvls shown to og naruto's , what we should compare is the feats of the characters instead , like hirezun being the strongest kage of his time which is cannon dude had the same title as hashirama did , and the fact that he fough orochimaru (who was considered the better of the sannin) in his prime as well as two at least elite jounin/kage lvl reanimations while being the old washed version of himself is a testament to his strength, and yh no hyuga is stronger jiraiya thats for sure , anyway i am done with this discussion as it is pointless tbh since kishimoto just made some big plot holes around hirezun wether it is his strengh or his character

Hmm seems my lack of proficiency in english has caused a misunderstanding , what i meant is to not compare jiraia strengh that we've seen in naruto shippuden to what we have seen of hirezun in OG naruto , as the fight animation and dmg scale got bigger in shippuden as kishimoto wasn’t planning that far ahead, we should compare them based on feats according to cannon. and i never said that the reanimations had the full strengh of the senju brothers but they were still the strongest hokages ( except naruto) even 1/3 or 1/2 their strengh is kage lvl , and with orochimaru who was "technically" in his prime , hirezun "basically" won that fight despite 3v1 while being old and emotionally unstable about killing his student . like tbh , you are the first one i have come across that considers jiraiya stronger than hirezun

first and second *

Nope , first of all , hiruzen fought with first second hokages reanimations and orochimaru at the same time while heing well past his prime and holding back against orochimaru till the end , and pls dont compare their powers by looking at the power the scale in original naruto as the power showcase and dmg lvls went bonkers in shippuden compared to the OG

Imagine saying jiraiya is the strongest in the village when there is hiruzen 😐

Yeaaaaah~ , he/she doesn’t seem to be right in the tbh

As of chapter 69 : <>-Writting Quality: pretty good , with almost no grammatical errors . <>-World Background : its Fanfiction so not much to say here . <>- Characters interactions : amazing , cannon characters act and talk like their original counterparts and OCs are great too , their interactions with mc feels fluid and not forced <>- Story Developement : Now this might not be for some people especially webnovel readers, as they are pretty impatient , anway story is a slow paced one with more emphazis on MC's development in character and in strengh, as well as his interactions with the world around him . <>- Character Developement : its pretty good honestly with it being not only about the mc himslef but also the people around him by being influenced by his actions and decisions. <>- Update Stability : seems like author is having a bit of a busy week right now as its been a week since the last update , but based on his earlier chapters , the story seems to be updated regularly on a 5/week chapter schedule with extra chapters each time a certain goal is reached, which is nice . In Conclusion I like the story , i think its enjoyable and am craving for more chapters dammit author get back to work ! … please

Nooo i caugh up 😭😭 , and its been a while this fic got updated , are you good author ??