It's honestly frustrating. The premise is good, the idea is solid but the execution is one of the worst I have ever seen. The way the story is flowing is literally brain dead however I can admit that I haven't finished the whole thing, the parts I have read are horrible. At first you would think it would be a DC oriented story about gaining power and expanding to the multi and later omniverse. But it really isn't, its a ploy for him to go to pacific rim and then other worlds while maybe years down the line go back to dc. *Spoilers kinda but not really, just a heads up* The story beats are horrendous, by that I mean. Him for some author'y bullshit reason having his dna be decoded in a matter of hours by some no names on pacific rim and then have them be able to literally instill his superpowers on even rodents mind you these arent only his superman powers individually which they did but also his multiverse transportation powers. Which means power transference and cloning, this doesn't bode well because some rando super duper "hot" science lady who is for some reason infatuated with his body will most likely be a love interest. Fun considering she mutilated him when he was unconscious The research to do all this took like a couple of hours in the book. It's all bullshit even after he woke up it didn't improve and from what I've gathered he won't return to dc for another hundred chapters. It's all meaningless filler with science that makes no sense whatsoever filling the lines, its not even the creative type of science fiction or understandable bullshit science its just purely wrong science. Reading what I did gave me a headache due to how infuriatingly bad the story was. I can't imagine the torture reading the rest of it would be. Honestly as a writer you should read your own story before you publish it and if you don't see how braincell killing it is there is something wrong. Sorry for harping on so harshly, I genuinely got a headache, felt sick and got angry due to how shit it was.

I usually never do this, especially not on old chapters. But its "their" their not thier, its their

I once dreamt that I was a creationist god. I watched over 5 or so planets and directes their development over the course of a couple of million years. as this was happening I walked around, mingled with the population under the guise of either a normal nobody or a homeless person. The best part was that as long as I kept the memory of it by writting it down I could continue where I left of the day after. This went on for about a week until I couldnt continue the dream. Been maybe half a year or a year since it happened. But yeah, lucid dreams where I can continue the dream have been my best ones. In another one I slowly ate a multiverse, or absorbed it good times

oh and if you are stuck read up on a guide or walkthrough to make progress as to not get soft locked because you missed an important scene or small convo with mercy

Thats why I usually use the cheat menu with 'c' but even then it takes forever. Plus you don't want to ruin the even scripting by skipping to parts of the game as then you might miss something. I had gotten pretty far on my old pc but forgot to get the data for my save file to my new one. Had to start over and I can't for the life of me catch up to the new content. I mean new gods, amazonians, the leauge of assassins and even gotham. Probably more in the future. if you want to get to new content you'll have to spend like 20 hours or more just grinding through it. Especially if you want to max out all chars, feels like 50 days of interactions or more to get one to max and if you do all as you get them it'll take until like day 500 and even then there'll be new ones or those with unfinoshed content.

A shame its so long winded and that new playthroughs are more or less a time sink. For a new player though it is gold among the trash that is H-games. If you're looking for something half decent you should check out 'superhuman' early content is less refines because the game creator becomes a better artist as development continues. Story is solid though and there is a decent amount of choice

neat, 'something unlimited'. Always nice to see someone know of it. If anyone wonders it can be downloaded on f95

Bro, she's like 14 or 15, man. and from the actions of the mc he's most likely reincarnated, so like bro tf?

sauce, if you havent forgotten it? It would be appreciated, thanks even if you have forgotten it

Sorry for misspellings, or rather use of wrong letters. New phone and Im not used to the keyboard as it is a different size from what Im used to.

It's well written and most everything in ot is interesting.The characters themselves feel fairly thought out and the world background is pretty well held together.Now I do have some problems with the novel, problems related to the romance first and foremost and the pace secondly.The pace while decent can get sluggish with chapters that are a pain to get through, but where the novel really is a shit show is the romance.The author should really wait until the mc is older to make romance work, mc is mentally a 20 something dude that has atleast some relation with the bad side of the world or used to be millitary. Either way, you can't just do everything in your power as an author to get him together with a 9 year old. It is disgusting and its just wrong.Then the character goes the "oh I lived in the 20th century so kissing isnt wrong" train of thought. Bro you made out with a 9 year old and the mcs brother is constantly pushing them together. It's weird.At the pace the story is developing and with how the 'relationship' or whatever is developing I'll image they'll do the deed by 13 or some bullshit amd have it be explained by "mc is following medieval customs" or some bs.tl;dr good story but author is pushing the mc to be a pedo. And dont use the "mc is currently 10" argument. Body is 10 but his mind sure as shit aint. Wait until he is atleast 16 to do this shit, even then I'll personally find it weird but dont do it at 10 or 9. 16 is acceptable, preferably it should be 18 or 20 but I know you wont wait that long

Bro she is like 9, are you seriously setting up a relationship between a 9 year old and an mc who is mentally a grown man

love to see it, shame I don't have a stable job, but I hope others will support you. Any thoughts of making a discord if you haven't already?

I really enjoy this story, its new in terms of writting when it comes to marvel fanfics.Though my one gripe is the length of chapters and the space between uploads. Mostly since all good novels have slowed down as of recently.Else I love the direction the story is heading in.Plus on the iq side of things, he has Iq but does that also include higher EQ if not wouldn't he eventually turn into essentially a purely logical machine, closer to a biological AI thought wise. Sorry if its been answered earlier in the story. Like I said, uploads are slow so I forgor some details.Still man, love your work as always. Shame it seems your earlier story is on standby but I get how you sometimes need a restart to keep writting as a whole. Else you risk burnout or just losing interest, which I'd never wish upon you. yer a treasure to this app

none the less its something fun to read during break at work. Plus most decent works on this site are slowing down when it comes to uploads. Only true mistake on your part would be the name, it doesnt capture what the story is about. Name captures something akin to a bland harem power fantasy or some such, while your story is more in the lines of lord of mysteries in terms of story. Just thought you should know, you arent capturing your intended audience, only reason I found it was because it was in the recommended section of a chapter and I thought "why not?"

Don't worry about it, its a great setting with alot of potential.Shame I cant read all of it for free but I'll try to read as much as possible by unlocking chapters using ads daily

New phone, so sorry for the words that are messed up.Dunno if I can edit without deleting so I'll write this in order to clarify

As much as I love the world that the author has created I do have some issues woth the writting quality.At some point around after the main character left the mansion the quality of writting turned more or less to the quality of an mtl. I am saying this as the first few chapters were very will written in terms of quality. The author himself also stated there would be no face slapping young master moments and while it is a semi valid statement there are mentions of kowtowing aswell as a young master antagonisimg the mc.Story itself and the world building itself is fairly good. I love the mix of magic, 1600s type architecture and mixed technology from the late 1800s to early 1700s.Anyway, tl;dr all in all. Good setting, similar to LoM in some ways, system and from what I know there will be players later. Bad parts are the grammar, wording in some parts, gender getting confused and things like characters knowning about kowtowing in a medieval european type setting that isn't earth.

why are there so few views and comments on this work compared to GoB's other works. Haven't gotten to the meat lf it all yet but still, fantastic writting as always. Shame more people haven't read it

Due to him having garou's talent or bloodline, does that mean he has a limiter he can break? One that could in theory place him in the realm of saitama