Review Detail of PlagueMan in Mistaken Final Boss

As much as I love the world that the author has created I do have some issues woth the writting quality.At some point around after the main character left the mansion the quality of writting turned more or less to the quality of an mtl. I am saying this as the first few chapters were very will written in terms of quality. The author himself also stated there would be no face slapping young master moments and while it is a semi valid statement there are mentions of kowtowing aswell as a young master antagonisimg the mc.Story itself and the world building itself is fairly good. I love the mix of magic, 1600s type architecture and mixed technology from the late 1800s to early 1700s.Anyway, tl;dr all in all. Good setting, similar to LoM in some ways, system and from what I know there will be players later. Bad parts are the grammar, wording in some parts, gender getting confused and things like characters knowning about kowtowing in a medieval european type setting that isn't earth.