Review Detail of PlagueMan in Not-So an Extra

It's well written and most everything in ot is interesting.The characters themselves feel fairly thought out and the world background is pretty well held together.Now I do have some problems with the novel, problems related to the romance first and foremost and the pace secondly.The pace while decent can get sluggish with chapters that are a pain to get through, but where the novel really is a shit show is the romance.The author should really wait until the mc is older to make romance work, mc is mentally a 20 something dude that has atleast some relation with the bad side of the world or used to be millitary. Either way, you can't just do everything in your power as an author to get him together with a 9 year old. It is disgusting and its just wrong.Then the character goes the "oh I lived in the 20th century so kissing isnt wrong" train of thought. Bro you made out with a 9 year old and the mcs brother is constantly pushing them together. It's weird.At the pace the story is developing and with how the 'relationship' or whatever is developing I'll image they'll do the deed by 13 or some bullshit amd have it be explained by "mc is following medieval customs" or some bs.tl;dr good story but author is pushing the mc to be a pedo. And dont use the "mc is currently 10" argument. Body is 10 but his mind sure as shit aint. Wait until he is atleast 16 to do this shit, even then I'll personally find it weird but dont do it at 10 or 9. 16 is acceptable, preferably it should be 18 or 20 but I know you wont wait that long