Review Detail of PlagueMan in DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)

It's honestly frustrating. The premise is good, the idea is solid but the execution is one of the worst I have ever seen. The way the story is flowing is literally brain dead however I can admit that I haven't finished the whole thing, the parts I have read are horrible. At first you would think it would be a DC oriented story about gaining power and expanding to the multi and later omniverse. But it really isn't, its a ploy for him to go to pacific rim and then other worlds while maybe years down the line go back to dc. *Spoilers kinda but not really, just a heads up* The story beats are horrendous, by that I mean. Him for some author'y bullshit reason having his dna be decoded in a matter of hours by some no names on pacific rim and then have them be able to literally instill his superpowers on even rodents mind you these arent only his superman powers individually which they did but also his multiverse transportation powers. Which means power transference and cloning, this doesn't bode well because some rando super duper "hot" science lady who is for some reason infatuated with his body will most likely be a love interest. Fun considering she mutilated him when he was unconscious The research to do all this took like a couple of hours in the book. It's all bullshit even after he woke up it didn't improve and from what I've gathered he won't return to dc for another hundred chapters. It's all meaningless filler with science that makes no sense whatsoever filling the lines, its not even the creative type of science fiction or understandable bullshit science its just purely wrong science. Reading what I did gave me a headache due to how infuriatingly bad the story was. I can't imagine the torture reading the rest of it would be. Honestly as a writer you should read your own story before you publish it and if you don't see how braincell killing it is there is something wrong. Sorry for harping on so harshly, I genuinely got a headache, felt sick and got angry due to how shit it was.