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Great chapter but you said they returned from diagon alley but hogsmeade should be where they get there supplies unless they can use a flow which would hurt castle defenses
So 2 snitches now... great grammar checking
Plot hole expelleddoesnt mean snapped wand because newt still had his after expulsion
This is a great read
SHE HAS A TIME MACHINE what is this time missing. She just jumps back to the time they left
Mha meets marvel
Heads up there is a titan in our solar system. It's just a moon
It's a ho-oh not Phoenix king
It's hufflepuff and ravenclaw please use for later chapters. Luv the book tho
This is a great story
If the curse is supposed to be crucio it would still be illegal
In what starwars did the jedi seek balance?
I love the story but the name of the order us so confusing when listening with the audio feature
This is great
We miss you author
Great story
Thanks for the chapter. And is the dad might guy
These chapters are way to short with nothing happening
What was the completed called. I knew I had read this before
If it was Harry's first year he wouldn't have known the previous librarian