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Josh_Barney6mthPostedI like the story so far and honestly hope that you keep going until you finish it. My only problem with it so far is just that sometimes it feels like the chapters are info dumps but that probably because they chapters are so long. I’m just not used to long chapters on WebNovel lol. Everything is well written so far, not many issues with punctuation or spelling. I like the characters background and the setup for potential arcs in the future. Hopefully everything keeps going well enough and this story with massive potential doesn’t devolve into some super massive harem fantasy that I find on here all the time. I do have to ask if this is going to be like really slow-burn or are there going to be small time skips to move things along?
- Josh_Barney6mthCommented
Is this gonna be a thing throughout the story?
How cute. - Josh_Barney6mthCommented
I don’t understand this reaction
How cute. - Josh_Barney1yrReplied to Monge_BRCh 63 Chapter 63: Prerogative
- Josh_Barney1yrCommented
God man you mention this every chapter and it adds nothing to the story
Harry didn't really know how to feel about her. Ever since they spoke after Christmas, they have been cordial with one another, but rarely ever spoke. Although Harry did notice that she was fighting with Longbottom after the whole detention thing, and when they made up, the boy who lived had cleaned up his act and stopped harassing people. Still, Harry couldn't really consider her to be nothing more than a friendly acquaintance at best, and in a way, he was glad for it. He wanted nothing to do with Longbottom and his cursed adventures. The events of his detention in the forbidden forest had taught him that. - Josh_Barney1yrReplied to Jai_pareek
I swear it’s just getting super annoying at this point
Harry didn't really know how to feel about her. Ever since they spoke after Christmas, they have been cordial with one another, but rarely ever spoke. Although Harry did notice that she was fighting with Longbottom after the whole detention thing, and when they made up, the boy who lived had cleaned up his act and stopped harassing people. Still, Harry couldn't really consider her to be nothing more than a friendly acquaintance at best, and in a way, he was glad for it. He wanted nothing to do with Longbottom and his cursed adventures. The events of his detention in the forbidden forest had taught him that. - Josh_Barney1yrCommentedCh 82 Chapter 82: Do Hunter's Dream?
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- Josh_Barney1yrCommented
With the quotations around the BANG, I thought someone was yelling it😂
This paragraph has been deleted. - Josh_Barney1yrCommentedCh 7 Sneaky Cat
- Josh_Barney1yrCommented
Yes please, there are no good lotr fanfictions
Trilogy events: - Josh_Barney1yrReplied to _Solomon_Ch 21 Chapter 21: Valonquar
- Josh_Barney1yrReplied to BalladCh 21 Chapter 21: Valonquar
- Josh_Barney1yrReplied to _Bruh
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"AHHHHHHHH" A banshee like scream sounded throughout the Feng manor. A number of maids and midwives ran in and out of a large wooden door, like headless chicken, while a pair of runners were fetching fresh, cold water, from the well in the court yard. - Josh_Barney1yrCommentedCh 275 Poetic Justice.
- Josh_Barney1yrReplied to N_NelsonCh 274 A Talk with Order.
- Josh_Barney1yrReplied to CoolbreezeCh 274 A Talk with Order.