I like the story so far and honestly hope that you keep going until you finish it. My only problem with it so far is just that sometimes it feels like the chapters are info dumps but that probably because they chapters are so long. I’m just not used to long chapters on WebNovel lol. Everything is well written so far, not many issues with punctuation or spelling. I like the characters background and the setup for potential arcs in the future. Hopefully everything keeps going well enough and this story with massive potential doesn’t devolve into some super massive harem fantasy that I find on here all the time. I do have to ask if this is going to be like really slow-burn or are there going to be small time skips to move things along?
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