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Kingo_Tepes

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2022-06-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented

    Punctuation marks! Observe your punctuation marks please.

    Ch 1 1
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    Naruto: Uzumaki Netero
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Posted

    Like most before it, I feel like this 100 fanfic has joined the ranks of being cringey as shit! From the way the MC interacts with the people around him to the way be talks to them. The author has used the common troupe of befriending Spacewalker and starting to right out flirt with Octavia the first time they talk. Some may say be wasn't flirting but the author did not put the (Octavia giggled softly) if it wasn't intended to mean he...fuck, I'm ranting. I was excited about reading this book for I thought it would be different.

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    The 100 : The duty of a leader
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented

    Second, why TF wasn't he fighting back? If he suspected he would be floated, why didn't he fight for his life? It seems quite forced the way they drugged him, the author wanted him to be drugged just to continue with the story.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : Prisoner
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented

    I was put off by the first drawback. Feral ghouls is fine because radiation, it dinosaurs? Like, really?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : Prisoner
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    The 100 : The duty of a leader
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to Goldenswiftreader
    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : Prisoner
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    The 100 : The duty of a leader
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to Rando_
    "Hello, my dog." Laying there was Ankoku, with all his limbs served, the skin sewn together by an amateur to keep him from bleeding out, his eyelid cut to keep his eyes forever open, and all his teeth removed. "I hope you haven't been waiting." Naomasa smiled, a deep blush on his face. "I missed you~."
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    Ghost in MHA
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented
    "Hello, my dog." Laying there was Ankoku, with all his limbs served, the skin sewn together by an amateur to keep him from bleeding out, his eyelid cut to keep his eyes forever open, and all his teeth removed. "I hope you haven't been waiting." Naomasa smiled, a deep blush on his face. "I missed you~."
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    Ghost in MHA
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to Blankio

    I know, just proofread and corrected the spelling mistakes I could see.

    Ch 26 Talking Business
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    Absolute Combat: Fanfic
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to TanveerBilling2002

    Just proofread. I'm writing this on my phone and it is cracked on one side making me use the one handed feature of the phone.

    Ch 26 Talking Business
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    Absolute Combat: Fanfic
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to SolarDragon210144
    Hi guys, I'm a little rusty but I hope you enjoy this chappie. I might or might not write another later on but, see you till then. Also, thanks for sticking with me for so long.
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    Absolute Combat: Fanfic
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to kyro454

    Here is a feedback for you, FUCKING WRITE A PROPER FUCKING SYNOPSIS

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    A Stranger Thing
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented
    Sylvester felt his little brain hurt from all the talk. To make heads or tails out of different words, names and locations without knowing their meaning was like understanding a wife joke while being Will Smith. They just don't make sense to you.
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    I Became The Pope, Now What?
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented

    So, I kinda forgot that my character was supposed to be arrested but I covered it up well. Consider that the interrogation was going on as the original Cynthia was been sat down by her clones about the costume.

    Ch 23 Talk With Lucifer
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    Absolute Combat: Fanfic
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to M7TH1C

    Because those aux might be five chapters making me believe he or she has more chapters. Call it pettiness.

    Ch -1 Mc's powers
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented

    Hope you'll like it.

    Ch 22 I'm Back
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented

    Wow, author is no capping everyone.

    Or emo wank stains like Obito and Sasuke.
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    Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Commented
    I paused, taking a knee and bowing my head, sending up a prayer to the Great Dog Lords of the Past to spare me the indignity of losing my life to fucktards like Kinkaku and Ginkaku. Let me be killed by someone cool like Madara, or the Raikage, even the Sound Team in the upcoming Chunin Exams operated with a level of deadly and sinister dignity worthy of respect when compared to absolute assclowns like Kinkaku and Ginkaku.
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    Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to SneakyKosher

    Best anime ever!

    "Finally, some action. Here comes the Kuma Kuma hero, reformed former Helmet Killer vigilante," she shouted before she jumped of the roof.
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to GigaThunder660

    Sorry, I was still a little confused of writing about a female character

    "They look good. With the genjutsu added that made sure nobody saw them, I will just be a normal girl in everyone's eyes. And, I can adjust my power accordingly so I won't have to burst open Amy's head when I prank her," Cynthia sighed in relief. "Also, now that I have these, what's stopping me from having all kinds of jutsus?" She just thought about it and the information flooded his brain while his body instantly mastered them all! With a clap of his hand, a poof was heard as a shadow clone appeared in front of her.
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    Absolute Combat: Fanfic
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  • Kingo_Tepes
    Kingo_Tepes1yr
    Replied to Drakon_Drakar
    "My mind is just too great to let anyone influence my psychically," she answered. An arrow whizzed in the air, heading to the back of her helmet only for her to deflect it with a kunai. One thing she knew about archers like Green Arrow or Hawk Eye, never catch their arrows. Loki was unfortunately the base of her lesson.
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