_Lucky_Clover
Hello, :3 The name's Clover; I'm a new writer who loves reading as much as writing. I hope people can enjoy my work and watch as I grow into a better writer.
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The image is not mine btw.
This is what the battlefield looks like, if anyone's wondering:
If anyone's curious, this is what it looks like: (Image's not mine btw)
Cya and her group got their abilities a long time ago, as well as most of the other students. Arzino's gifted academy doesn't have a specific enrollment period; anybody can enroll whenever, as long as they match the requirements, so most of the students got enrolled a few years back and had time to learn new skills/abilities and train them, unlike Servare, who is both new at being a gifted and attending the Academy. Sorry if I didn't make this clear enough.
Dunno why this is here either.
Dunno why this is here. Can't remove it for some reason.
It's-a-me! The shameless author. You know, I don't really think this story deserves a five-star review, but more of a three-star one; the only reason I rated it a five is because of a quote I once read, it went something like, "If you as the creator don't like your work, then why would anyone else?" So I've been trying to focus on the good things and ignore the bad. But that's not really the focus of this review; this was supposed to be a QnA type of thing, so ask away! :3 though, weird questions will be left unanswered.
That's amazing. I didn't think anybody could figure it out, although now, everyone knows what it means. Oh well, it's not that important anywaysâgood job on figuring it out.
What? For real? How?
Haha, don't worry it'll get revealed later on.
Thank you, I'll try to post longer chapters every other day :)
Fifth chapter and still no major mistakes; I promised to proofread 5 chapters, and today I just finished proofreading the fifth; well to be honest, it was more like reading than proofreading since I didn't really fix anything. But what I'm trying to say is, I will no longer be a proofreader but instead a regular reader. I hope to read more amazing chapters from you, my friend.
I appreciate the compliment, thank you very much. <3
I tried to find any major errors worth pointing out, but I inevitably failed. My greatest fear might've just come true; I may no longer be needed. I'm very happy for you; you improved so much. I will keep trying to find any mistakes but I'm pretty sure I won't find that many.
"and create equipment for himself." Remove "an" from the sentence and you're good. You haven't made a mistake since the last one, i'm impressed. Truly, I can't believe you improved this much within such a small time span. I'm afraid you might not need me anymore, heh.
"opened the door and entered (the shed.) The smell of alcohol (filled every inch of it,) (making him think about the) hellish life (he once lived.)"
"There were only torn carpets and empty alcohol bottles on the floor." You don't have to change this, the original one is okay; this is all optional.