Review Detail of _Lucky_Clover in The Moon's Blessing

It's-a-me! The shameless author. You know, I don't really think this story deserves a five-star review, but more of a three-star one; the only reason I rated it a five is because of a quote I once read, it went something like, "If you as the creator don't like your work, then why would anyone else?" So I've been trying to focus on the good things and ignore the bad. But that's not really the focus of this review; this was supposed to be a QnA type of thing, so ask away! :3 though, weird questions will be left unanswered.