huh?? I thought the setting is before luffy is born??

harem kills plots and vibe of the story, better keep it as no romance unless there is the one true heroine. There is one fanfic that I read that involves manga creation while its chapter grows, the author put a harem it basically kills the reader enjoyment in what happen next since it turn into predictable. that make the strong female enemy/rival character into lover of the MC because the MC is unbelievable strong.

"want a job" vibe is so like the hey kid wanna see my mysterious stash. LOL

for sure Hancock gonna ask her uncle vegapunk on making a love potion for luffy lol

To be honest Ei attitude is like hikkimori since she just shut in in the plane not doing the work and let the puppet do the shogun work in her coded input which resulting into this mess.

been so long, I though you been overrun by high school/college homework.

Hah, I check it again look like didn't have it. probably in the raw and untranated version.since I remember in one of theory of one piece, the narrator mentioned that the list also have lunarian in it. probably misheard it.

look like you forgot the lunarian race as they were in the list.

you deserve a power stone as you made interesting and rare category of fanfic.

*Cries in celebration as this reader is sick of see every route of fanfic or original having a NTR route.*

+1 I ain't wanna make mama park know that Danny doing NTR stuff. so let go for vanilla.

from the description it would be jjk than neir since no.9 is much shorter.

Take a break first and stack file your chapter until you are satisfied with the amount no need to hurry just be sure to update once in a while to reassure us that you will continue this ff. btw how many words does your chapters have I kinda wanna start my own ff.

it better to not listen at all lol, since sometimes it can Lead to writer block in the future or go into cringe hole like the one piece mangaka where mc f up the storyline and build a harem. which leading me to skip out alot chapter since its making me cringe alot. so better go with your ideas.

Look like the system is now infected the in game character with it manga main character power effects or sound effects.

It's like the Overlord Ainz situation. except it's sasuga Alyssia sama for over "predicting".

The war made me think about chimpanzee war due to the devil apes lol. yep really made me invision war with hakis, alot of fast speed water guns and robot animals.

adding the space pirate stuff, it felt like it turning into dragon ball lol.

I already missing the story huhuhuh.... welp another idea for the store is to add themes music in the store like all type of themes music in tevat aka putting music inside the store for relaxing reader or breaking dancing during the night/putting dance lesson for the battle theme lol.

This you can give us some small info on what happen or just hints us.