finally someone who uses sinbad!! Although I think the Fairy Tail verse would fit better, I am still very interested in that future story.

It is not my desire to make harsh or negative comments, but I am tired of giving so much potential to those of kimetsu and although you balanced it well with senjutsu I simply feel that it does not coincide with the world of Naruto or in terms of power, and more Even his attributes being the main ones the agus and the lightning, in short, tired of the breaths of kimetsu invading other fics.

I love this story but you should know that they were both under the command seal and they didn't know about "root" either, only that Danzo is one of the leaders of Komoha. I feel like Tsunade seeing that interaction, she could have sealed their chakra but she told them to die for nothing like this doesn't fall into the category of evil Mc? I just need to leave the village and it would be a cliche...

I don't want to sound bad and make no mistake, I love history. However, I see too much filler that does not respond to us at all, very short chapters, indifference of the protagonist who seems like a machine, I don't know, I'm losing the fic a little

thanks for the chapter. Although I would appreciate more fluidity and a greater reaction from Mc, I would like it if after all this he took care of Danzo and that no one could stop him, I mean, with the jutsu he uses they couldn't stop him even if they wanted to.

One about young justice or marvel would also be good, but it should be about a third son of Odin who is qualified for the throne of Asgard.

I don't know if you've seen it but I would really like a Game of Thrones or House of the Dragon fic but with an MC like yours, capable, with charisma but who projects strength, although I would like the MC to be from another house other than Targaryen/Stark, maybe a Martell, I don't know if you know the story but it's very underrated when they are one of the best houses.

I have similar complications, I want to make a story based on an Uzumaki from the time of Tsunade but there is little information on everything, from the seals to the chronology and age of the characters. I think Minato had improved it referring to general use and the kunai that facilitated its use.

I had an idea about destruction magic for a Fairy Taile oc, who could be Erza's brother with the appearance of Sirzech Lucifer and his nickname would be Spriggan the guardian of the fairies but I didn't know how to start writing if it caught your attention Could you use it, I would just like some romance if possible

as long as you make xin sit down so you can see her reaction and there are consequences for her infidelity it would be interesting in fact, i can understand where she came from after her unstable attitude but we want to see more emotions from xin not the simple efficient machine that she is and this maybe from the opportunity for better emotional and personal development of xin

It doesn't bother me but I would like Azula to feel remorse and for Xin to find out, for there to clearly be consequences, not for the ship to be lost but for there to be indignation and for there to be a better development of the supposed "harem." Also, Zuki shouldn't sit back. Crusaders neither

No lo dejaré ni nada pero tengo muchas quejas, el tipo tiene menos de 10 años pero trollear a kakashi un élite Jonin, de paso los anbu de root le pasan información cuando en teoría tienen un sello que les IMPIDE hablar eso ya es una mamada