Why is he so short?? 5’9 is below average

I hate to say it but the main character is a simp. Instead of making her fall in love with him, why does he act like the inferior and goes to mess with that other man. I think she doesn’t like him because he is too nice to her that caused her to Friendzone him. Like the saying goes in order to capture one must let loose. He should never show that he likes her or she will feel less interested. Simping=Death

I dropped this not because it is bad. Just because it was feminist. It might not be great for me but might be very juicy for other. Thank author sama bye

Sorry if it sounded offensive, what I meant is that everyone has their own personality and this one just doesn’t fit mine. There maybe other ppls out there who may like it tho. I like the concept of your novel but the personality of the character are not to my liking. Again sorry if it sounded offensive to you

Author can you plshh add one more no two more girls that is enough. Harems became bad when there are too many

Almost 8000 low grade spiritual crystals per month. When the yield comes it will be 16000 or 24000 low grade crystals depending on the time. Almost all the profit goes to labor. So let me ask you is he working just to make them rich or developing that area. As a business student this is so stupid and unreasonable. Dude that is basically the tax profit of a year going to bunch of farmers.

Also once farmers farm the lands and plant the seeds they just have to do some minor work of taking care of what they planted. So the pay is a bit too much. Also Farming is a common job, almost anyone can be a farmer so the pay isn’t justified. He is being too extravagant.

40 low grade spiritual stones a month for a farmer? Considering people only have to pay a tax of 1 low grade spiritual stones a year isn’t it too much? Finding farmers isn’t that difficult when it’s just 200 people. In my opinion 8 low grade spiritual stones is more than enough to attract ppl.

(Dropped)The novel started out great but thing that messed it up for me is the fact that after his heartbreak with his first love, he took the initiative to be a simp and explain to her like a little doggy. I mean I’m pretty sure she knew he liked her, I mean she is his close buddy. In my opinion she is the one who should have come to console him and explain not the other way around. Instead when he came to explain she also thought such a little thing doesn’t have effect on him. I’m very disappointed by how things went(no matter how great his mentality is in his past life this doesn’t make it right). Just because he was great and have mentality doesn’t get her to treat him like that and is not an excuse for him to become a simp, it is even a time when you evaluate your friendship( since she didn’t come to his house to explain I believe she is not even qualified to be his friend). I just can’t imagine a guy who basically got heartbreak take the initiative to contact the one who broke it. It’s basically a masochist behavior and I can’t stand that. From that point on I just couldn’t keep reading it( from what I see, if the author aware of his mistakes it’s actually good, but if not hmmm..... it is said the book is a reflection of the author)no offense !

It was ok at first but after chapter 31 things starting to go downhill for me. Especially Ame is just a soil that ruins a good milk. my advise to the author for future novel. Almost nobody, especially male who are the target audience do not like reverse masochist. Most audience who read this tend to be masculine males. Before you write a novel you have to decide what you deliver and who to write to. Like for masochist or masculine males(normal men) or others ...

Exactly my thoughts, feels like the author is trying his hardest to ruin her character. I’m very close to dropping this because she seems to be one of the main heroine. As the saying goes a drop of soil will ruin the milk.

To specify she acted in a very exaggerated manner. She beat up those guys that badly for just having a guys talk. I mean everybody has their own secrets and dreams. I just can’t find it funny( ps the only person who might find this funny might me masochist). As a masculine guy this kind of thing completely throws me off as it is too childish and unreasonable for their age or other reasons.

That was cringe man. Made a big deal out of private conversation. I hope no cringe. It forced funny, it doesn’t feel funny

Right, it is so sad that most authors go with the existing little sister routine and they don’t try to create a new type of personality that is based on reality so saaddd am not even gonna bother reading if I see little sister blush it cause I know what’s up xd. Also only a little sister why not a brother or both. I will stop here cause if I start listing out problem with current authors writings a day isn’t enough 😭

Thnx for reply

As a person who is very good with numbers I can’t help but comment on the points from the system. He should have about 1360 pts but it says 1060. I don’t like it when numbers get messed up. Just throws me off. If you feel like giving him that many points was too much just edit that part. Thank you!

Bro pls less cringe.( sect master and Nesterin dialogue is like a tsundere girl carried by the MC) it just completely breaks Nesterin’s boss character

Gorre conversation is really cringe. At first it was cool, I took it as a joke kinda, but the dude won’t stop talking. Like he jokes all the time. It getting a bit annoying.sorry if that sounded bad just my thoughts(btw I appreciate you work) also I noticed a character change in ratha which is nice cause she at least started speaking actively instead of being introverted. Pls less cringe but cool jokes here and there is good. I hope gorre speaks less cause he is kinda doesn’t add any importance in the dialogue

I just don’t understand how a dynasty can be so incompetent that they can’t even guard against enemies. It almost seem like they are like that useless female heroine that follows the MC around. Also please explain how someone weaker than MC can give him such a fatal injury. It had to be known the higher the realm the harder to try to kill or injure you. And as I presume that the sage realm is OP. It makes no sense that the Mc can get injured by one strike. All I’m saying is that try to make it believable, add more realistic elements and give as a solid MC betrayal story. This is what every Cultivation novel is missing. Trash this trash that like every human has time to focus on one person and calls him trash. Cultivation novel are slowly becoming boring because of this nonsense. Realistic world element are sorely lacking. Like actual human emotions and logical reasoning.

He meant you the character’s appearance and figures. You don’t explain what they look like like their hair, body size, facial features etc...