(Dropped)The novel started out great but thing that messed it up for me is the fact that after his heartbreak with his first love, he took the initiative to be a simp and explain to her like a little doggy. I mean I’m pretty sure she knew he liked her, I mean she is his close buddy. In my opinion she is the one who should have come to console him and explain not the other way around. Instead when he came to explain she also thought such a little thing doesn’t have effect on him. I’m very disappointed by how things went(no matter how great his mentality is in his past life this doesn’t make it right). Just because he was great and have mentality doesn’t get her to treat him like that and is not an excuse for him to become a simp, it is even a time when you evaluate your friendship( since she didn’t come to his house to explain I believe she is not even qualified to be his friend). I just can’t imagine a guy who basically got heartbreak take the initiative to contact the one who broke it. It’s basically a masochist behavior and I can’t stand that. From that point on I just couldn’t keep reading it( from what I see, if the author aware of his mistakes it’s actually good, but if not hmmm..... it is said the book is a reflection of the author)no offense !
THE_WORDSMITH
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LIKESorry if it sounded offensive, what I meant is that everyone has their own personality and this one just doesn’t fit mine. There maybe other ppls out there who may like it tho. I like the concept of your novel but the personality of the character are not to my liking. Again sorry if it sounded offensive to you
THE_WORDSMITH:The event your review is based on was something to fill in a little gap that could not be bridged, I would really appreciate if my readers kept their comments about the book they read and not my personal life.