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Review Detail of Iasonas in The Great Machine Sage

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Iasonas
IasonasLv32yrIasonas

Really good story. love the idea and where it is going so far, the only reason it isn’t any higher than a 3.6 is because of the lack of character design. Which I’m sure will improve in the later parts of the series. I look forward to reading the story, and hope you can bring out the best of quality while remaining healthy.

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The Great Machine Sage

Harlyboy

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Micky_Man
Micky_ManLv1Micky_Man

He meant you the character’s appearance and figures. You don’t explain what they look like like their hair, body size, facial features etc...

Harlyboy
HarlyboyAuthorHarlyboy

Can you elaborate about the character design?