what are you on about why will he have the mind stone and if he has that already he Does not need more power to rule Asgard plus Thanos had it in the original and gave it to Loki while mind controlling him plus if it's MCU loki loves Thor bruh what in the garbage mess is this story

wait there is no explanation about what is happening and why

English is also not my first language It's my 3rd language i learned on my own just from watching American YouTube so you have a skill issue

do you read your own fic bruh maybe ask a Friend to read it for you if you have a friend that is because it's writting in such a stupid way even I have used AI before but even that was not as bad

overall garbage its a translation or whatever feels shit to read it like I feel I have to smash a Hammer in my head and get Dumb to understand this shit the plot is ass the MC is garbage its predictable as soon a X-men are involved plus the MC and girls reactions are so weird bruh like she just accepts shit so easily and goes with it

MEN

Dude blowing bubbles on it 🫠

author is so gay

Member of Hand ??? HuH they where thugs not ninjas plus i Don't think police is good enough to know if it's hand that's more on Shield stuff

ok the author said there will be smut most of the story even he put it in tag his first chapter author note what are you incapable of not getting it that he will write smut and it will be just a mery sue strong guy who fucks bitches and pretend it's some gospel of God stfu

you must ignore every street sign this what a retard

40% will be plot 60% smut and where Do i got this number from I wonder lil bro go lick salt and get high

why not 😭

oh my a Blind person can't read authors note or tags what Do i do are you illetrate or something poor baby

oh it's a smut fic i Dont want a smut garbage fic i wanted a normal fic but my Day is ruined

bro is slow even some fanfics release more chapters then you I love it and all i want is to read more of it as i have not much to read 😭

to much info Dump

oh so many chapters and they are all so fun it's like an episode of a Morning cartoon I love it keep it up hope cosmo gets her Body back i Don't know her character much but she looks fun

asmongold Oh no !

MORE MORE MORE I WANT MORE REEEEEEEEEEEE