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sighduck4hCommentedPlotting from someone within the village? I thought they rooted out all the major troublemakers by now. Am I forgetting someone? It was my understanding that the new barrier would prevent outside influence. Unless I’m misremembering.
"It seems you don't trust my words. In case you reconsider cooperation, use the method outlined in this scroll to reach out to me. Deliver this scroll to Rasa; I know he will be interested in my proposal," the cloaked figure declared before vanishing from the room as swiftly as they had appeared.- sighduck8dPosted
Lots of unexplained elements going on. The wrong pronouns are used more often than I’d like for a paid novel. The biggest reason behind my rating is the fact that there are too many unexplained elements which makes it feel like there are plot holes. The two main characters talk as if the reader has all of the necessary context, but it doesn’t get explained until a subsequent chapter (if at all). The unnecessary mystery isn’t for me at least.
- sighduck9dCommentedCh 4 The Melancholy of Astoria Greengrass
- sighduck16dReplied to KaironjavisCh 8 Welcome to London, England!
- sighduck28dCommented
Formatting of this paragraph is weird. Just me?
Deep within the ocean's abyss, Kazuki's lithe form danced through the dark waters, locked in a frantic battle with a colossal Megalodon. Stripped of his usual arsenal, he relied solely on his physical prowess, every muscle straining against the relentless force of the sea. With Shiro-sama's decree, even his trusted blade remained sheathed, leaving him to confront the behemoth with only his bare hands. - sighduck28dCommentedCh 36 Winds of Change
- sighduck1mthCommented
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Isn’t it 5?
VIP Level: 3 - sighduck2mthCommentedCh 77 Chapter 77
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- sighduck4mthCommentedCh 13 Chapter 13: My Champion
- sighduck5mthPosted
There’s a lot about this book that I really enjoy but it’s also very hard to truly love. The good: - World building - Side characters have depth - Combat The not-so-good: - Increasing number of mysteries with very few questions answered - 600+ chapters and I feel like the MC doesn’t know much more about himself than at the start - The pacing (how is the MC still level 50?) at this rate I’ll be old by the time the main cast catches up to the real threats in game. Or the pacing is going to get all wonky. Other: - Feels like the MC should have been able to do more with his past memories. The fact that those memories are fragmented isn’t my favorite. But maybe it’ll matter more in the future.
- sighduck7mthCommented
Do these actions have to do with the soul issues he has? Seems awfully vindictive to me.
Alex, satisfied with the trade, said his goodbyes and left the building. He had already accomplished what he wanted to achieve, and now he needed to prepare part two of his plan. He had already started to ruin their lives in the real world, and now he was going to do it in the game world. Matt had created a guild in the previous timeline, and he was going to destroy it. While he was at it, he might as well damage their souls. Although he couldn't personally do it, he had a guild to do his bidding. While he was walking home, he messaged Mia about what to do and to inform the others to help. He arrived at his house and logged back into the game immediately. - sighduck7mthPosted
- sighduck7mthCommented
Zzzz
Especially after receiving a system notification about completing a task, he was even more convinced that these female leads harbored ill intentions. However, he missed the system's final note: [This system is for plot disruption. Note: Due to intense competition and rivalry in this field, this will only be explained once to avoid detection.] Su Chen's thoughts were elsewhere, so naturally, he didn't notice this. - sighduck7mthCommentedCh 9 Cohabitation Routine