Lots of unexplained elements going on. The wrong pronouns are used more often than I’d like for a paid novel. The biggest reason behind my rating is the fact that there are too many unexplained elements which makes it feel like there are plot holes. The two main characters talk as if the reader has all of the necessary context, but it doesn’t get explained until a subsequent chapter (if at all). The unnecessary mystery isn’t for me at least.
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