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Mommy? I mean, Mommy? I mean, Mommy?
Then and only then… Do we indeed ball.
You’re short
Why even write a story if all he’s gonna do is “watch live”
See this is what I meant that this story has potential but wasted. This would’ve been a good read had you actually started writing from here. This is too much information for it to only be a summary of his past in the life.
Had potential to just be more than a harem grab. I don’t mind a perverted MC, but this MC isn’t even the good or funny type of perverted, just the lame type of pervert that only has his mind on Big breast, sex, im definitely gonna fuck this character because she looks good. We dont even have a reason as to why he’s this perverted, all we know was that in his past life he tried to do everything he could so that his parents can have a easy life but died. And now all of a sudden in this new world the only thing he could think about is SEX, BIG BREAST!!! Again he’s not even the good or funny kind of pervert, hes like those perverts you see in NTR and arrogant. (Those ugly bastard ones).
This is the type of pervert you can’t really stand, nor is he the funny type.
Already knew this was coming
Is Asia not with them?
Do it