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Don't worry, there will be a special chapter with this event in the future.
One of the palace maids came over to serve tea to the queen, and others did the same for each guest. "Anyway, thank you all for being here and for choosing to participate in the bloody spring... The event is named after the little mess that took place 3 centuries ago... King Wang Zan, also an omega and well known for always walking around with roses stuck in his hair, was almost branded by one of the participating alphas. Fortunately, he only had a strong estrus, but he ended up getting carried away by strong emotions and ordered his punishment for trying to rape him, the king, to have 1000 roses stuck to his skin for three nights..." It was possible to hear the whispers of guests. They were completely surprised by the penalty chosen by the King. "... It's been a long time, it's just history. In the end the alpha returned home completely healthy, but the friendly relations between the two nations don't last. For pheromones reasons, the guards inside the palace are all betas, they are allowed to act in any circumstances that they understand to be out of control. I hope you can understand, in case of punishment, I will not be as romantic as Wang Zan."
Sorry, the story is undergoing revision due to writing issues and some parts are moving around during rewrites. But I'll send you the original sentence that was in the first chapter and I hope it makes it easier to understand. :)
Well, my story or that person, just try to be reasonable.
and before you talk about the deleted comments, they are deleted as chapters are changed, and my story is under review, so there's not much that can be done, but I'm aware of what you said and I'm taking it seriously, thanks.
You can be critical and not tolerant about mistakes and I even apologized for that, but when you take it personally by calling me something it just says it about you and not me. I don't like comments that criticize what I write, but I take them all as learning... But I'm only going to get upset with people being rude and ignorant for no great reason and that was the case. I do not intend to continue this discussion, I thank you for the feedback and I reciprocate it by suggesting that you be careful with the words you use, you can lose your reason simply by acting like an idiot.
Thank you, I'm trying make better, I have to say it's a little longer than I'd like to... But I'm doing my best, I hope you can understand my efforts. I'm not ignoring your comments, I'm just avoiding answering comments after so much rudeness that I've had to tolerate over the past two years.
Okay, my stories are stopped exactly because they're being reviewed... I write out of love and to help in some way to support me, you just acted rudely being that you are not even obliged to continue reading if you don't like it. What can I say? You just left me hurt for free... About you not being an English speaker, I honestly don't care, I'm not being rude to people based on who I am, people are not equal and have their own difficulties. At least I hope you don't come up with these comments to other people, you can just ruin the day or month of someone who's writing and wearing themselves out exposing their ideas for everyone to see.
Well, English is a language I don't speak, I apologize for that, but you calling me trash says more about you than about me.
thanks for reading, it's going to be a very funny and sweet journey I hope you'll follow from start to finish <3
Love may be an eternal cliché, but it is always sweet and memorable. Have this story as a place of comfort, love is sweet and problems have solutions.