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The demon Prince rank makes sense but in CMDK it's more like a designation given to a pure blooded child of a Demon King, the Author never expanded on it as well (again) since he was in a hurry to end it, one of the many several plot holes.
All round it's a boring story with an uninteresting main character everything happens "just because" and the fact that a demigod is struggling against someone like Deathstroke is laughable, grammatical mistakes littered all over this, barely any character development don't waste your time on this, there's no tension, build ups or pay offs the MC is like watching paint just waiting to be dried, I just hope no one is stupid enough to purchase chapters on the Patreon.
Just a thought really not some forced suggestion at the end of the day it's your story and I'm here for the ride but I know i wouldn't want to read about another Fang Yuan every RI fanfic feels like it's cut from the same cloth, everyone wants another guy chasing immortality for some reason but if it works for you then no probs just enjoying the story man.
Well I don't want to be a debbie downer but that bridge isn't so far, although I haven't read Reverend Insanity in a while, I remember Fang Yuan went back in time after Bai Ning Ning sacrificed herself using her Extreme Northern Dark Ice Soul physique and that was the earlier chapters. Also Bai Ning Ning for FL (jk) 😂✌I mean fire and ice though...
Yeah this idea sounds dope but in CMDK Fallen angels are also a species that exist in the Abyss as well unless you're planning to change this lore for your fic, then the Demon Bible Chapter 6 will be redundant because in CMDK Lucifer never fell he was created by the creator as one of the Kings of the Deadly Sins