amazing

pretty cool :D

seems good please explore more of the other straw hats abilities as well like the chopper rumba ball like does it work with luffys fruit and such things :) I am excited for this fanfic

this is awesome :D

i hope the mc actually help the straw hats actually improve on there skill like luffy's rubber powers weren't fully explored there is so much that rubber can do. also chopper and robins power should be explored more. like can luffy use chopper's Rumble Balls and have different forms of rubber like liquefied rubber or something. there lots of stuff to with the different power of the crew :D

more please :D

I love this fanfic please keep it up :D

Really good so far :D

Thanks for the chapter!!!

I wasn't saying it in a bad way I just saying it was better than the mark-mark fruit sorry if it came out that way I am not good at writing. :D

nice devil fruit idea is it the better version of the mark-mark fruit that i think vanken daken had. I can't remember his full name but cool devil fruit. I hope he can like put a tracker mark on his crewmates so he can find them where ever they like zoro hahaha. sorry for the long message. Thanks again for a great chapter :D

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter again :D by the way are you going to have the mc tell them about haki and all the different types of devil fruit. I like the whole ghost rider move set maybe he could steal smokers motorcycle :D Keep up the good work :)

Thank you for the chapter :D

Thanks for the chapter please don't drop

Thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter <3

Thank you for the chapter :D

Thanks for the chapter

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