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ColiJiyo

ColiJiyo

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I like writing it because it lets me use my imagination to create a story where no one has ever been before. ☕ Currently working on my books: The Ash Earth, Nocs, and D.no

2022-02-21 JoinedMalaysia
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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo1yr
    Replied to Lazy_Chicken_God

    No not harem. :D

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo1yr
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    Hi, what are you confused about? The flow of the story?

    Ch 7 Memory Overload
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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo1yr
    Replied to Fiaran

    Hi, you're right this was at the wrong chapter - this is actually at chapter 25 titled Silver Bear. My apologies.

    Ch 20 Passing the Golden Pavilion
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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo1yr
    Replied to RAMichaels

    Thanks! It's really encouraging to see reviews like yours! Will work hard on this :D

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo1yr
    Replied to ThePotatoKing

    Glad the plot and concept took your interest :D Hope you enjoy it!

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo1yr
    Replied to trumpet_creeper01

    Thanks for the support!

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Lovelydaisy

    Thanks alot for showing the love <3 Haha! I'll keep up the hard work. Really appreciate you for showing up in the comments!

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to CosmosGalaxZ

    Thanks for your feedback. I think so too - it was 3,100 words and so much more than what I wanted to write. So for now, I've kept the prologue but moved it into a chapter of it's own. So that if others wants to they can skip straight to the real first chapter. The prologue helps me and some other as a setup so I hope that this will keep the pacing. :D Appreciate your comment!

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Posted

    I like the MC, I mean most of the character is well designed. I haven't caught up to the latest chapter but I do enjoy a bit of the suspense. The tension is there and it provide some expectation to what's gonna happen. Looking forward to how to story develop :D

    Masquerade of Madness
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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Posted

    Your character and their development are fascinating to read, and I'm inquisitive about how the character will develop more in the future. I enjoy the genre but would like to know more about what the college in this story is like?

    Her Once Upon A Time Boyfriend
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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Uzowei_Tehillah

    Thanks for comment!

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Jude_K_1656

    I guess that is fair, "Lance". But I think the author need to brainstorm abit more. To find a better fit in the world the MC resides in.

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Jolan_Hildebrandt

    :P sorry bout that.

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Enchsier

    Hehe, I also like Larisa's character the most so far in my story. There will definitely be more of Larisa in future chapters.

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Laineee

    Thanks! I really appreciate your comments and compliments! Will work hard to update and keep the story interesting! I did put plenty of effort in the flow of the story :P

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Sparuh_Aru

    Thanks! I really appreciate your comments and compliments! Will work hard to update and keep the story interesting!

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Posted

    The character was ok for me, didn't really fancy their names. I enjoyed the pacing and the flow of words. It was comfortable to read. I think this book have potential, gotta keep an eye out for more updates in the future.

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Jolan_Hildebrandt

    You know what? I whole-heartedly agree with what you and a few other readers commented. It was a wall of exposition and it have been bothering me for a while. But I've reworked it now and am quite happy with it. It's still a setup but it's something more like a movie intro, at least in my imagination. I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I do.

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Nikola_Niko

    What can I say, I was inspired by Tolkien hahaha

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  • ColiJiyo
    ColiJiyo2yr
    Replied to Enigmaticwordsmith

    Thanks! It's really encouraging me to continue writing! :D

    Ch 1 Grand Irricester Institute
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