Review Detail of RAMichaels in Ash Earth Awakening

Hello, I wrote this long review and thought I clicked post. Nope. Lost in the net sea forever. I loved the premise because of the evolution of the MC. The depiction of the battlefield variables and firepower also made for a great reading experience. You could smell everything as it was painted so beautifully. Yes author, you did a great creative job at storytelling but please ensure a second set of eyes goes through like a fine comb and fix the grammatical errors and misspellings. Overall great story!!! Cheers, Ra!