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ExoticSenta1hCommentedSo, why did he choose DC? There would have been thousands of other, safer, worlds to start in.
He would rather not drop off uninvited within a city, cause massive damage and tick off the big blue Boy Scout.- ExoticSenta4dReplied to Shub_Niggurath
Good point, though, all of this creates a hole in the premise/world building...
The [Power of Destruction] would reach its maximum efficiency with the perfect control granted by the Astaroth Clan's [High IQ] rather than being used as a weapon simply for brute force by both the Bael and the Gremory. - ExoticSenta4dReplied to Shub_Niggurath
The 'Blood' in bloodline disagrees with your statement :) Also if demonic power frequency or whatever is responsible for "bloodline" powers, someone random could, by chance, awaken POD or even the Phenix bloodline. And, also, that way EVERYONE would have some kind of special random 'bloodline'. Genetics are a way better explanation, which would aslo explain mutations in specific bloodlines (Sera for example), and the birth of new ones (Hole - Abaddon i think).
The [Power of Destruction] would reach its maximum efficiency with the perfect control granted by the Astaroth Clan's [High IQ] rather than being used as a weapon simply for brute force by both the Bael and the Gremory. - ExoticSenta12dCommented
Or try to replicate it...
The woman suddenly become serious, " But you shouldn't tell anyone that you got your gift after accidently jumping in the river as people might become wry of you." - ExoticSenta12dCommented
Ah yeah, im also a big fan of curvious woman :)
"Hey, child! Are you okay?" A beautiful, curvious woman asked, but before he could reply a sudden pain attacked his body, causing him to scream out loud. - ExoticSenta12dCommented
Also, Results of the results?
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Quite a lot of people actually. Mc has no backing or money, and it the guy he attacked is competent, he could sue and get the mc locked up, even if there was a witness.
After all, who would have the audacity to challenge someone again who had proven to be so relentless and had nothing to lose? - ExoticSenta12dCommented
That would probably leave his skin pink, not light. Why not come up with something more beliavable? Alergic reaction, sickness or whetever. No he goes with the most stupidest answer possible, like wth?
'Well, if they ask, I'll say I underwent a laser treatment...' Reiji thought. - ExoticSenta12dCommentedIn the living room, Reiji concocted that he had won a prize in a skin whitening treatment lottery, valid only for that day and expiring at ten in the morning. Although it was a hard justification to swallow, this was the most convincing explanation given his pale appearance. After all, the alternative would be to believe that he was ill to the point of losing all color.
- ExoticSenta12dCommented
He should have gotten a mask or something to hide his identity...
"Alright, let's get started with this..." Reiji murmured. - ExoticSenta12dCommented
Did you write this? It differs from your writing style...
One who watches closely, though from afar.] - ExoticSenta12dReplied to Skaviouz
Does that work? Asking for a friend...
"Damn, did his mother sprinkle sugar on him at birth? What kind of dog luck is this?" - ExoticSenta13dReplied to Kratos_theLycaon
Dude, it sometimes took me 8 hours to write and edit 3k words... His system is making it effortless.
In moments, his fingers danced on the keyboard at an incredible speed; in just 30 minutes, he wrote a total of 3,000 words. - ExoticSenta13dCommented
Hmm... dxd is played in 2008, the best you could get then was a quad core cpu, so his dual core settup isnt even that bad.
The entire process took almost 1 hour; the laptop, after all, wasn't the fastest. It was a simple dual-core with 3 GB of DDR3 memory, and the Wi-Fi wasn't very fast for downloading. However, for now, it sufficed. - ExoticSenta17dCommented
Shouldnt he be British?
"You do the same to me. And besides, I'm American." - ExoticSenta19dReplied to MidWinterSnow
So? You can't just say imagination casting and be done with it. Imagination casting is not all powerfull, he cant simply gain knowedge out of nowhere. I would have accepted him reading and somehow memorizing the memories of the language from people, but then the experience of him using is still remains missing.
With that, the classroom burst into an excited chatter, the students' faces lighting up with curiosity and anticipation. Some were waving their hands in the air, trying to get the new teacher's attention, while others were shouting in their seats with excitement. - ExoticSenta21dCommented
Does he even know how to write Japanese? The language skill he has from being a devil, only works while speaking and not reading and writing.
With that, the classroom burst into an excited chatter, the students' faces lighting up with curiosity and anticipation. Some were waving their hands in the air, trying to get the new teacher's attention, while others were shouting in their seats with excitement. - ExoticSenta21dCommented
So, i know he is using an item to hide his demonic power, but how is he masking it in his spells? People will notice the traces of it, and realize he isnt using mana or cursed energy. You might need to say that he is a half-devil, or something.
In the case of a Grade One cursed spirit, the bare minimum was a few minutes. Enough to serve his purpose. After all, he could feel cursed energy signatures nearing his location. - ExoticSenta21dCommented
But why? He is simply risking his life for no apparent reason.
It also helped that August would be in the heart of the Jujutsu world, with its headquarters located in Tokyo and had the chance of getting a upper hand in the upcoming DXD plot. - ExoticSenta21dCommented
Huh? Why?
"I need to get there as soon as possible" He felt a sense of urgency as his determined gaze reflected the rapid pace of his thoughts as he processed the new variables and adjusted his plan accordingly.