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Author, I need to ask. Is what’s seen in the extras the future end of the story? What Victor will reach and get. Or will he go beyond that. I think it would be pretty cool that the whole reason he is being protected is to do something/not have something happen that limits him or stops him from being able to do something. Either way, don’t know if it’s the best to spoil the ending (even if it’s just a little), as that takes out so much of the mystery, but I trust you’ll get this done in the best way possible.
MC is a retard. Doesn’t address the root of his issues, and keeps bringing more on himself. He already made like all of his girls have a mental break down learning about each other, gets shot, makes them have another one, and then goes “you know what I should do, bring another girl to live with me” and thinks things will just work out when his girls still haven’t even recovered from the previous 2 incidents . Like what? Does he like have zero common sense on how emotions works? No wonder why he couldn’t do jack shit without the Ero Meter, he’s a total idiot. Not to mention all of the supernatural occurrences. He keeps saying “this has to stop” or “ima put an end to this”, and 2 paragraphs later he’s back into his emotional train wreck off a life. It was a good story until the super natural stuff was introduced, and it’s just the plummeted since then.
Oh and on another side note, hope the whole being controlled (emotionally) by his family stops, or is at least limited. Sure. respect your elders, and also I agree that “living life on your own terms” is pretty much a fantasy, but I just don’t find it entertaining seeing the MC get almost manipulated like this. Either way, nice book author
Im at chapter 46, and it’s pretty interesting. Though I do hope this family bs will mostly clear up soon, as frankly, it isn’t what I’m here to read. It’s definitely unique, and so far extremely well written, but this isn’t “My Journey To Become A Crime Boss”, but “Titan Rising Online: World Breaker”. Either way, great story and a whole lot of potential, but I just hope the story doesn’t go down a emotional rabbit hole, but stays on track.
Love the book, but I have a potentially suggestion for the ending (don’t worry about it if you have plans). Maybe he grows on power, and the book ends off with him entering the main reality, but immediately cuts off the moment he enters as the author (people like you) can’t actually affect the humans of Earth. Idk, thought it would be cool. (And if he does, making him bring the girls too). Either way, thanks for your time
Don’t know how to fell about him wanted life on “hard mode”, just doesn’t make a whole lot of sense. It will never be hard mode, as there is a 0% of them letting him die, so what’s the point of all this? Idk, nothing inherently wrong with it, just feels like it adds a lot of nothing to something that doesn’t need it.
People be calling this cringe, weird, or edgy, but it was pretty good. Being all alone, purely killing and growing stronger would probably morph the mind more than we could imagine, so finding change or an escape of that would cause intense emotions as it goes against everything he knows. Remember, he really doesn’t have his past memories, all he knows is killing and growing stronger, so deviating from that is massive for him. You can call it forced if you want, but it’s been building up since chapter 1, and if you can’t see that, your just dumb
This was great, MC doesn’t suddenly not fear death the moment he gets his cheat. Even though he is many times faster than the robbers and could probably get away safely, he is paralyzed in fear, which is completely normal. And for anyone saying he’s a coward, if you had 5 guns ready to execute you, I highly doubt you would be doing better.