Liked your other novel, but this is a little too different than the canon, You just changed his entire personality and hate he has for mito. I mean, kurama even wanted to kill naruto as an infant to escape

Well, he's a pretty good hokage tho. Like if the president of a country favors his own child more than the country then he's simply not fit to be the president. It's the same with him.

Aren't they like classmates from the past year ?

Will he follow the canon throughout the story ?

But why ? If he has the power to easily neutralize them, then why would you make him follow the plot without any reason ?

It was going good but this chapter is way too summarized. I mean why did you pace up the plot so much in a single chapter.

I've read upto 20 chapters and i've to say I personally cannot imagine naruto like this. It would be okay if it was a reincarnator but i just cannot imagine someone like naruto cursing fuck this and fuck that every other chapter.

It's getting kind of disappointing that he's never even trying his best. Will it be like this for the rest of the novel ?

It doesn't work like that yk. Why would his parents be so extreme towards only him and not any other sibling without any possible reason like he is not adopted or anything like that. I understand you want to make his past like that but this is just unnecessary.

I think you've watched the wrong naruto my guy. He stood up for her when little children were bullying here because of her eyes. The kumo incident is in no way related to that.

This has got so much potential yet it physically pains me to sometimes even read it. MINOR SPOILER : So basically, we have a child who's the youngest awakened mage and started training earlier than everyone else in both his archery and magic. He spent years fighting beasts in one of the most dangerous places in the world alone and fought all kinds of beast for years without rest while training and finally when he's around 10 or so years, the author just bombards us with information that his two cousins are now more powerful than him. They're more powerful in ranks compared to the one who awakened at the youngest, had best talent and practiced everyday just like that? The normal age for awakening is around 11-13 according to author yet his 12 year old cousins not only awakened early but are also better than him somehow. Also the sheer number of times he cries while missing his family gives a vibe that he's absolutely not a 40 year old reincarnate. I mean even a normal child wouldn't cry every other chapter or will have tear in his eyes every time talking to someone close. I've read close to 150 chapters and even though i really like the world building and want to read more, it's getting considerably harder to read it. Will the story continue this way throughout the novel ?

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She's reincarnated bro.

Even the previous arrogant lucas would be better than this stuttering mess

It will not be a harem Thanks for reading

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I think i developed a tumor reading this. It is barely readable and on top of that if you are trying to make it like solo levelling at the very least make the mc a little bit like jin woo. A good cross over concept but you seriously fucked it up

If his name is jin woo , you better make him a monarch 💀

Honestly i was about to drop at 100 too but i tried to endured and i have to say it is one of the best reads. Especially around 500 when everything starts to make sense. Do give it a try if you could. Character growth is amazing.