Review Detail of voidd in Psychic in a Magus World

Greetings Readers!! Like all Author's here's my shameless review. So far, I've published 9 chapters and a I honestly have no idea where my novel stands quality wise. You will be the first to read directly following the Author. I'm pretty excited to find out how it turns out. Any kind of healthy criticism will be appreciated. Please do give any advice if you have. I hope you all like my novel.