it is by no means bad this is one of my favorites and as far as quality goes it tops alot of the other fan fics.

A new chapter is nice but I was hoping for it to continued from where the last chapter left off. I personally feel like the story hops around too much.

is there going to be more chapters it's been 4 months

alright yah got me I guess I will continue

Gotta say I personally don't like the merging of comic book universes with the movie ones but alas I guess I will see where this goes I have come this far anyways

Forgot to mention that the Mc seem useless without the system telling her what to do

The way other characters interact with the protagonist is weird they seem to gain trust in the Mc way to fast and fall in love with her to point where their holding hands and passionately making out after knowing each other for literally two days.

I personally feel that the Beginning before the Mc got to her new world dragged on way to long. Aside from that the writing and Characters and story so far are fantastic

This whole story is simply outstanding the fact that it such a limited number of views is baffling.

Your trying your best and putting time into your story the chapter length shows that so keep it up

I only read the first chapter. But from what I could tell from the first 10 mins of reading is that the word choice is as best as I can put it lacking and weird. I feel like expanding the vocabulary used or having someone proof read it could have helped with some of the awkward word choice.

alright nice and thanks for responding

I read this awhile back and realized I forgot to leave a rating. And on the off chance this seen by the writer any word on if or when it may continue.

Might I suggest a Fantasy setting in the future if that is not already an idea perhaps a skyrim or D&D type world if you could work that in. If not it is your story and ultimately the direction is your choice and so far you doing a fantastic job.

I hope this keeps updating since all the other ME fan fics are consistently dropped

Simply outstanding and a great read with incredibly long chapters

I read it all in one night when around chapter 100 I heard the birds chirping and went "oh shit oh fuck I did it again"

I literally check back every couple hours only to find a new chapter

I read a chapter watched a movie came back and there was another one

This story had an excellent idea and presented it well seeing a Mass Effect and Titanfall mix is certainly unique but alas it'd been year as much as I would love to see an update I don't think it's going happen.