Review Detail of DarkAce_Ghosts in Halo Vahrian

Item: Halo Vahrian
Rating: 2.2

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DarkAce_GhostsLv127mthDarkAce_Ghosts

I only read the first chapter. But from what I could tell from the first 10 mins of reading is that the word choice is as best as I can put it lacking and weird. I feel like expanding the vocabulary used or having someone proof read it could have helped with some of the awkward word choice.

Halo Vahrian

Krota456

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DarkAce_GhostsLv12DarkAce_Ghosts

Your trying your best and putting time into your story the chapter length shows that so keep it up

Krota456:Yeah, your right, im not at good at it, but ill see what I can do to make my writing better throughout the story... But overall, thank you for the message

7mth

Krota456AuthorKrota456

Yeah, your right, im not at good at it, but ill see what I can do to make my writing better throughout the story... But overall, thank you for the message

7mth