Review Detail of DarkAce_Ghosts in Halo Vahrian

Item: Halo Vahrian
Rating: 2.2

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DarkAce_GhostsLv127mthDarkAce_Ghosts

I only read the first chapter. But from what I could tell from the first 10 mins of reading is that the word choice is as best as I can put it lacking and weird. I feel like expanding the vocabulary used or having someone proof read it could have helped with some of the awkward word choice.

Halo Vahrian

Krota456

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Krota456AuthorKrota456

Yeah, your right, im not at good at it, but ill see what I can do to make my writing better throughout the story... But overall, thank you for the message

7mth

DarkAce_GhostsLv12DarkAce_Ghosts

Your trying your best and putting time into your story the chapter length shows that so keep it up

Krota456:Yeah, your right, im not at good at it, but ill see what I can do to make my writing better throughout the story... But overall, thank you for the message

7mth