Don't take to heart my comments . If I am not good in imagination in reading . Your story is bit scattered point of view . Maybe you can give some hint which part the reality, the flashbacks and the imagination . Hope my comments can help you

Maybe auto spell using the author while typing the word. Instead of see it's sea meaning same sounds but different spelling and different meaning...

I put my self with this comment to have good flow of every turn of events

For me I think 1st Parul and second maybe new beautiful girls ...

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I hope this story give more motivation to read more novels in this series and more importantly that I can make it possible for me to use this

The flow of the story have enough to attract the attention of the readers. I hope more interesting twist will be on. Thank you for your story help pass time.

Give more, I like it. ............................. ........................... ......................................... .....................

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