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DaoistKgLzCV7dCommentedWhere did he get sand from?
It hurts so bad that it is going to bruise. He was coming at me again. The second I realized I wasn't going to fall but crash onto the wall, I put my hand in my pocket, pulled out the sand, and threw it at his face. Because of the sand, the tear in my hand started to throb.- DaoistKgLzCV7dCommented
whats this?
-Then I want the Authentication skill- I said, undeterred. - DaoistKgLzCV7dPosted
This had potential to be pretty good. But it goes waaaaay to hard with the konoha bashing. Author turned basically all of Konoha into Danzo clones. Everyone is evil. The only people not being absolutely shit on and blamed for literally everything are the people the author personally likes and whoever he recruits for kumo lol
- DaoistKgLzCV7dReplied to DRAVIDIAN
Yeah this fic goes hard with the konoha bashing
He simply didn't have water supply in the first place, much less a shower, but he didn't want his first friend to know about that. - DaoistKgLzCV8dReplied to Maya_Matengele
It wasn't the confession that was cringe, it was the mc's response with the harem stuff. Anyway, can you clarify some of the time travel shenanigans for me? My assumption is that the time travel stuff works like this: Mc decides to go through with his plan, then a version of him goes through with the plan and sends the info back. If that is true, then one version of the mc would flip the notebook to the next page and see nothing, because its his job to go through with it. So then why is the mc super confused when be sees nothing on the page on the 3rd or 4th attempt or whatever it was? Wouldn't he assume first it was his job to go through with the plan and send the info back? Also, if the plan succeeded, why would the guy that succeeded go "hell yeah everything worked on, anyway let's go back in time." Why wouldn't he stay? He already succeeded. Also couldn't he abuse this way more? Like, he knows plan whatever is gonna work, so he writes in his notebook for example: Go through with the plan and then send back the answers to tomorrows test in school. Or something like that, if it works like you showed can't he exploit it endlessly? Also worth mentioning: This might have already been answered in the original, but It's been a pretty long time since I read the original. And personally I think it's the authors job to remind the reader of things so you don't have to read the whole thing again just to understand what's going on.
detailThe Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the UnderworldAnime & Comics · Maya_Matengele - DaoistKgLzCV8dPosted
3 things I don't like. 1. Mc is way too Gary stu. He is perfect, the best at everything and everyone loves him. 2. The time travel stuff at the beginning was so bad, time travel almost never makes sense in fiction and has plenty of paradoxes and it's the same here. 3. I had to drop it at ch22 where I died of cringe after he got confessed to and his response went something like "I love u too but I need a harem bro please" (I can't remember the exact words cux I've already repressed the memory)
detailThe Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the UnderworldAnime & Comics · Maya_Matengele - DaoistKgLzCV8dCommented
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If 8yo me saw adults kissing I'd go "eeeewww" not blush but ok
"Mmmh... Richard... right there... d-don't stop..." The woman's sultry moans caused blushes to appear on the children's cheeks, the youngest of the bunch, a seven-year-old dark-skinned boy, watched in extreme focus, earning a glare from Annalise and Mrs. Thorrin. - DaoistKgLzCV22dReplied to ShaftOfAntimatter
I don't fully remember this, but I'm pretty sure it was that Shisui guys father who mind controlled the nine tails here? so it's not just him. Shisui has the instant mind control anyone but it seems like even normal genjutsu can mind control the nine tails
The first attack of the mighty Susanoo pierced Minato's stomach and left a gruesome hole in its place. Minato, sensing the danger, summoned a barrier of chakra to protect himself from the second. But Fugaku was too quick, and he was about to plunge the knife into Minato's chest but wild red hairs appeared in front of Minato at last second and took the knife in the chest for him. - DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommentedThrough abnormal means, your mind has had its 'limiter' removed. As such, you can utilize and see PSI and are thus a psionist. PSI is the power of one's thoughts, released when all the cells in the brain are functioning at full capacity, overtaxing their mind to actualize PSI waves that result in various abilities. There are three different types of PSI waves, with a secret fourth type. Trance gives the user access to various mind and perception-based abilities, such as mind control, scanning areas, and mind reading. Burst is the ability to control one's surroundings, shaping them at will, typically matter or energy manipulation such as telekinesis. Rise focuses on enhancing one's physical capabilities, such as strength, speed, durability, senses, reflexes, coordination and healing ability.
- DaoistKgLzCV1mthReplied to MaitreyaNirvanaThere it is. William thought. He knew there would at least be one idiot dumb enough to not notice William was the one Commoner that couldn't be offended. His lips curled up in a slight smirk as he thought of the future but concealed it quickly lest Briar notice anything unusual.
- DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommentedCh 27 Overpowered? Endless Upgrades!
- DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommented
William is so arrogant lol
There it is. William thought. He knew there would at least be one idiot dumb enough to not notice William was the one Commoner that couldn't be offended. His lips curled up in a slight smirk as he thought of the future but concealed it quickly lest Briar notice anything unusual. - DaoistKgLzCV1mthPosted
I can't take this seriously at all. I read the first 3 chapters and nothing makes any sense. The existence of an instant mind control jutsu that works on literally anyone and is impossible to guard against is just insanely dumb. And then the Uchiha clan leader just casually mind controls fucking nine tails instantly, so it's not even a shisui exclusive. And then there's how nine tails got free. From what I can tell, minato put his hand on kushina's back and then boom, tailed beast is out. Really? There exists and instant anti-jinchuriki technique that just bypasses any and all seals and shit? And this doesn't kill Kushina somehow, jinchuriki suddenlu losing their tailed beast? No problem she is ready to fight. And the fights too. Fugaku is about to stab Minato (how btw?? This is literally the yellow flash and all that was mentioned was that Fugaku was "too fast") and then Kushina appears to take the hit for him. But.. for kushina to appear in between them at the last second she had to have been beside them, and would be in a perfect position to idk, push Fugaku? Hit the outstretched arm? Literally anything? And then Minato wins and its written that the mind control on the nine tails is gone and then... Nothing. Minato talks with his kids, teleports away and presumably the nine tails is just fucking chilling. This is just so fucking dumb. Only 3 chapters in and there are more plot holes than Harry Potter
- DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommented
None of this makes any sense man. Instead of idk.. Pushing fugaku she stands in front of him? Why? Also the mind control stuff is so dumb. Instantly mind control anyone, even the 9 nails lol. Why didn't sasuke do this in cannon? Just mind control any problem away. I can't take this seriously with the gigantic leaps in logic
The first attack of the mighty Susanoo pierced Minato's stomach and left a gruesome hole in its place. Minato, sensing the danger, summoned a barrier of chakra to protect himself from the second. But Fugaku was too quick, and he was about to plunge the knife into Minato's chest but wild red hairs appeared in front of Minato at last second and took the knife in the chest for him. - DaoistKgLzCV2mthCommented007 Another Way to Die
- DaoistKgLzCV2mthReplied to CreedFollower
so if you use a blood path gu and a dream path gu at the same time, it will cost more essence or be weaker or something? also is it permanent? as in, you use one dream path gu now and you are forever tainted by the Dao mark making you slightly incompatible with other paths?
"This definitely involves Dao marks, but which path? Perhaps Heaven path?" he considers the idea but quickly dismisses it. He knows how special and difficult to cultivate that path is, as throughout human history, only three Venerables have been able cultivated it, and two of them aren't even born yet. - DaoistKgLzCV2mthCommented
can I get a tldr on this dao mark path stuff? I tried the wiki but I didn't get it
"This definitely involves Dao marks, but which path? Perhaps Heaven path?" he considers the idea but quickly dismisses it. He knows how special and difficult to cultivate that path is, as throughout human history, only three Venerables have been able cultivated it, and two of them aren't even born yet.