Review Detail of DaoistKgLzCV in The Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the Underworld
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3 things I don't like. 1. Mc is way too Gary stu. He is perfect, the best at everything and everyone loves him. 2. The time travel stuff at the beginning was so bad, time travel almost never makes sense in fiction and has plenty of paradoxes and it's the same here. 3. I had to drop it at ch22 where I died of cringe after he got confessed to and his response went something like "I love u too but I need a harem bro please" (I can't remember the exact words cux I've already repressed the memory)
The Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the Underworld
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Too perfect? Gary Stu? I always advise people to read with their eyes open for a reason, you should do the same.. Time paradox? If you read the canon version, then you should know that time paradoxes are prevalent there. Therefore you should expect them in any FF of the novel. That it confuses you is your problem, not the fic's because many others understand them because everything is clearly explained. And cringe? Really? Which confession isn't cringe in hindsight? So you basically gave 2.5 star rating because of preference and your inability to understand what is clearly explained as well as ignoring all the mistakes, faults, and failures the MC had in all the 22 chapters you read and focused on only the successes and you claimed 'Gary Stu and too perfect'? Be honest with me, Is your real name 'Karen' by any chance?