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Housing bubble says hello. Demographic collapse says hello too. Virtually all high- end chips are produced in the 'other' china. What 'The tech giant'? If they are only stealing, that means they will at best be on par.
last sentence ruined everything the paragraph tried to build
GLORY TO ARSTOTS- wait, wrong game
if its needless to say, don't say it
in cash? are we in germany?
all sorts of methods? like what? slamming his virtual head against a rock?
depends on the ice. if there's oxygen molecules trapped in there, they would be released upon melting, increasing oxygen concentration in the cave. though, you might flood yourself sooner than a noticeable change would occur. all depends on how this yin to ice magic works
welp, bust the vodka out, u gonna need it
? its not harming nor manipulating mc. at least not necessarily. if this already qualifies as disgusting in your eyes, I fear for your outlook of life, my friend
probably: technically no; spiritually yes
except its not 14000 in one punch. whatever, its webnovel fantasy- anything can happen
No. Even though the grammar isn't the worst i've seen, the quality definitely makes a solid point for it. The story is told in a very monotonous and undescriptive way. Word of advice; if the first paragraph instantly makes you lose all interest, the author's probably done something wrong. Don't know if this improves later and I don't care to find out.
first paragraph and already a perfect example of y u should show not tell. Its been so long and still the writing is like this? Its hard to enjoy the story if the writing is like this
seems almost impossible to actually make an independent institution in a feudal society
??? doesn't the attitude of the institute as well as kelbor indicate that its quite relaxed? nothing would happen
don't threat? try freat
so much for no dirty tricks
maybe too depressed and anxious to rely on his ability. or author conveniently forgot to include it or let the mc forget. either way, it should at least be mentioned in some way. not that it matters, i'm out anyway. can't handle the bad english, good luck to anyone continuing