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And bro it’s not about plot armour, it’s common sense of being best assassin
Bro then are you telling me the, the best assassin trusted his organisation or he just didn’t care he and his families expected death
Bro please don’t call him best assassin in the world, if he was He would first kill the whole spider organisation and then think of quitting the job. He is just naive assassin who is good at doing his job
Yes that’s right , there is always sky after skys
Life is fair but human makes it unfair
Bro what are doing you are writing the same thing repeatedly again and again
Arthur I have a few questions please answer 1) why are you using battle energy instead of qi or mama.? 2) why is MC is dumb when using the system !? 3) why is MC is not taking full advantage of system ?? 4)why is MC is not selling the skills he got from the ring to system ??? 5) will MC stay this bumb the whole novel or get any better !???
with F why are you being goody two shoes ?!!! it's disgusting
Bro too little exp
bro spelling mistake in 2nd line
bro how to pronounce this. please give easy name for system
bro use this symbol for system<>
stupid
bro story is going in more predictable way and i can guess what will happen.and your Concept is good, and may be one of the best I have ever read but your over praising and too predictable story line is making it sloppy and boring.and if there's too many female around mc it will feel boring and non-existing. like if you introduce a female character we will know she is on of mcs.