Review Detail of Latidy in I Received System to Become Dragonborn

Item: I Received System to Become Dragonborn
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

LatidyLv121yrLatidy

So far the story is really enjoyable, but I feel like at the beginning it was too fast-paced. Everything felt a little rushed. But other than that it's a good read.

I Received System to Become Dragonborn

Diyen_Pi

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LatidyLv12Latidy

There isn't enough time or words to see how the MC is feeling, it's all just too fast-paced. I would recommend to slow down a bit and focus on details.

1yr

Diyen_PiAuthorDiyen_Pi

Thanks for the review. I will improve the story. 🙇

1yr