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arnt u wanking the mc too much he's a street rat for godsake not a kid who was trained since birth like i can accept him not being noticable that is a system perk but srsly he acts way too all knowing for a kid with no actual magical combat experience. street brawling and fighting against professionally trained fighters are two different things
I really don't know why this has such a high rating but I'll talk about what I felt when I read this book. So basically the mc comes from another world which also has magic he is also an "archmage" or something and no he doesn't have any knowledge of harry potter as you can already tell how this fic is going to be written with first few chapters where the "mana" in the hp universe is "weak" and their magic is very "crude" he used to have a "magic core" in the old universe and all that cliché stuff. He is basically the generic revenge mc with no "emotions" basically the normal edgy bland character that you have probably read a thousand times. He also joins clues out of nowhere the author probably meant for him to come off as a smart character but for me it looked like he is pulling stuff out of his ass So no I don't think the book is worth reading at least for me but if this is your cup of tea go for it
Dude the story is real good but the thing is no one is gonna read it if you don't change the title it is too generic and it is not even capitalized I read it because I had nothing to do but then realized that I found gold while looking for copper
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really good so far lets hope you dont make this into a evil dumbledore like fic
I kinda saw it happening but I liked this happening more than rudes/lilia pairing i mean come on lilia is like 28 and rudeus is what five? so by the time he's 20 lilia will be 43 and she's human not a demon or an elf so \i guess this was the best move but what i want to know is what is the main theme for this ff drama? romance? action?
I hate stories like this seriously this is so cringe
Do you really think that, Youcan see that even in the books the durseleys never beat up hp that much i mean come on like dumbledore had taught for more than 50 years compared what some other students has gone through hp was not even that bad and the blood protection was also needed to be factored in so yes i dont think that dumbledore is evil he is manipulative thats true but everyyhing worked out in the end