Did the Author swap to a medieval Englishman? Thy novel quality hath lessened!

Why does it sound like chat gpt wrote this 🤣

Story is stale and forced. Lot's of changes to the MCs personality in the initial chapters, it just doesn't gel. One minute he is crafty, then always just says things upfront, then doesn't feel he should voice his grievance. Too much forced plot, it doesn't feel like natural story progression.

He listened to everything prior. He actually followed all orders and showed no hostility despite being the only one armed and the strongest there. Author is trying rationalize after the fact

Fenrir could have killed them both many times over, especially since he thought he was ghe only one with a weapon, but he didn't. All this rationalizing and back tracking by the Author to say how bad he was and how justified it was is getting old. MC comitted evil because he thought he was removing evil. There is no moral high ground here. History is written by the victors.

Really good story with a unique concept. I actually enjoyed this so much I didn't even realise I had binged the entire novel to date.

Paywall at chapter 14 after nothing but inner monologue and POV is crazy to me. I even skipped 2 POV chapters as they were just uninteresting. Nothing has actually happened. If the first 13 chapters are a sign of what's to come, count me out.

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I disagree entirely. The only reason the cost of execution is higher is due to the flawed legal framework surrounding it in many western countries with multiple appeals etc. As for innocent being killed, again that is due to a flawed and outdated system. Also, stricter punishment and laws do deter crimes from happening to a very high degree.

These days, not so much.

This was a really fun read. The comedy is there, story development, character design and overall world building are all very eell executed. This usually wouldn't be my type of novel, but I thoroughly enjoyed it.

It's average at best.MC has simp energy. Fiance rejects him, but he is going to make her his woman, because he likes to sniff her and shes pretty. Instead of girls falling for him, it's like his virgin self has to force himself onto them. 2 lives and still not touched a boob [img=thinking]MC behaves like a 3rd rate spoiled young master who usually gets faceslapped, but this time he is the MC. Other than MC, the writing quality is good, the world building is not there. The characters have no life or depth, they are just cardboard cutouts. I enjoyed reading the comments more than chapters. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

It's boring and everything is too convenient for MC. MC has unlimited lifespan and conveniently every single thing in this world is locked behind a lifespan requirement that only someone with unlimited lifespan could unlock.Need talent, burn lifespan. Need weapon , burn lifespan. Need ultimate technique, burn lifespan. Need ultimate medicine, burn lifespan. It starts with potential, but wastes it and gets repetitive and boring very early on. Need repetitive and boring novel, burn potential.

MC becomes a literal subserviant slave to another character. Garbage!!

This is great writing and a great story.

I readeth past the mighty paywall and have returned to share my tales.The writing is good, but the story development is nonexistant. Nothing of substance really happens, there is no tension and no real drama, just lots of filler.Lot's of plot seems forced and not thoroughly thought out. Like the made up rule of students must be same party all year, but it only applies to that specific year or how someone can catch up to level with the MC when he is literally earning exp in his sleep from minions.I just found the story kinda bland.

Wasn't worth in my opinìon. Too much filler, no real story. 100 chapters in and nothing of substance has really happened.

It feels like I am reading the inner dialogue of the MC, without any world building, character depth or storytelling. Bland and uninteresting. The only thing that's missing is "Captains log date xxxx"

Boring and unoriginal.Nothing unique about this story, characters are bland, system is meh, story is uninteresting, writing is lazy. It's a shame, the first few chapters were promising and then it just became poorly executed cliches.

Author has smol pp confirmed. I honestly tried to give this one a fair shot, but it just gets worse with time. The story lacks depth and any real consequences. It's the same thing over and over with MC randomly picking up girls, super cliche 2D bad guys, MC steamrolls entire army, rinse & repeat. Goes completely downhill around Arkania arc.Should've dropped it early with the heero stuff, but gave it a chance