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Primas17hPostedevery single thing is repeated in manage stories you just translated it and change the name of the characters and something other than that everything all thing is same from maximum of the MTL novels where your brain will rot after reading some stories if you are not some Chinese f****** shit sorry people because not maximum of them I have seen some people are good but those who posts their story anything similar like MTL novel then their brains beyond repair I don't even know how they can even think without being normal person
- Primas20hCommented
I don't know why people forget that the thing that he wants if the most easiest thing in the world to lose you just need a little bit more than a little bit of money and you can get that that's what an idiot goal should be and he should be at the bottom of the class society world universe whatever you can say if that's the goal of that person is
This young man is Milles, a virgin man with no girlfriend. He has tried to change this status, even confessing his feelings to the most beautiful girl in school, but was rejected. - Primas1dCommented
+1
2. Satisfied with porn-to-plot ratio (smut after 10-15 chapters) [This is what I like.] - Primas1dCommented
what did you say in the last
"Bury the dead, treat the wounded, get that girls arms back, rebuild the walls." The leader said, he had done most of the damage, thus he got most of the light. That the orc became. - Primas2dCommented
she looked
"I-It's not my safe day today." Jenny nervously said as he looked at Zach. Though she also had climaxed and felt great pleasure for the first time in her whole life, her mind suddenly went clear upon feeling Zach's semen inside. - Primas2dCommented
his ability
"This is my secret." Zach replied with a smile. After that, he then guided her to her table as he slowly told her some of her abilities. Looking at their relationship, Jenny was something that he already marked as his woman and so it was normal for her to know this so that the questions in her mind would also find peace. - Primas3dCommented
your whole story is made up of mistakes, first) when monster are killed maximum of the time they leave their magic stone and small number of them only leave their whole body parts even that is rare sum of baby only leave their weapons or clothes and you forgot one more thing nobody f**** monster from that done gone they don't want to die not maximum of them second) your first story which I have already read and this one still doesn't make sense it is good but you are doing lots and lots of mistakes and you are not even correcting them and your way of writing I mean your punctuations to sentences doesn't even make sense if you don't use your brain, what time mean is you have done lots and lots of mistakes that even the set sentence you are trying to say does not come out in a right way and at least he was not heartless in a first story of yours before rewriting it now he has become what you call heartless mother f***** , he was an idiot before but now he has become what you call maximum of us people of today's society a heartless mother f****** society realistic with no empathy
Wordlessly I handed over a healing potion I had previously fused to her. "Drink," I said with a sigh. "If you are going to carry my burden... Actually, if you are going to be plucking the monster stones for me, you are going to need to be able to move and my name is Jake Barris of the Hephaestus Familia." I said dully as I realized I actually didn't need her much at all when I had my fusion inventory. - Primas4dCommented
I think you have some kind of mental problem because if the thing you are thinking applies to both the side then l your is life
"How nice it would be to have a world where women understood that I could give love to all of them, something like in the sultanates of the Middle East… although things were also problematic there… haaa… maybe if things were like in those animes, the whole world would be happy" - Primas4dCommented
her not his
The two exclaimed before Izuku zoomed in at lightning speed and Katsumiu created a large explosion from both his feet and hands producing booming sound that caused large dust while the others shielded their eyes. - Primas5dCommented
your copying this concept of the story especially this part from another because I have read the similar one and I know the name to I am not a kissing you in just saying you copied that Idea it is good but I don't have been better if they world in it together you get have made something different but it's okay
The next day, Izuku and his friends head home with Melissa accompanying them. She will be staying with Allmight and was recommended therefore she will not take the exam. Furthermore, she skipped straight to 3rd year in the hero course and will be studying in the support hero department. - Primas5dCommented
was not were
In that time frame, Melissa had grown closer to everyone, especially Izuku, who always flustered every time Camie's question ran through her mind. They accepted her to the unofficial harem squad of Izuku who were ignorant even when they were clearly talking about him. - Primas6dCommented
her
"Stop it, you two!" The two began to quarrel, making AllMight give an apologetics expression while Itsuka enlarged his fist to give them a smack, surprising Mellissa. Izuku instinctually evades her while Katsumi follows suit and barely dodges. - Primas6dCommented
that's not a hero that's dense idiot if you don't you know what you are getting yourself into that's not an good thinking because it will get yourself killed, yes you did safe somebody but but at what cost , at the cost of your life to think before you act he was a villains have one difference in their life and everybody knows that
"Yes it is when they move without thinking and saving someone despite the consequences. You knew you would be scolded by the heroes and yet still acted." Allmight replied. - Primas7dCommented
because he saved her
Her parents were arrested from child neglect and abuse while Himiko was adopted by her aunt and uncle who gave her the help she needed. This caused her to develop a crush on Izuku because she saved her and gave a chance to have friends who accept her. - Primas7dCommented
please changes f****** name it's a represent to weakness I think it is shown in anime
"Except Deku, no one else is worth mentioning! But I'll be number one and not you Deku!" - Primas9dCommented
+1
2. Himawari wa Yoru ni Saku. - Primas9dReplied to holt_kessho
you should do the Pokemon and the Pokemon should be oshawatt
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